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I believe this might be where Celestia interrogates the Monster.
Wow, I really like this chapter. Star Horn's demeanor and your take on Luna's behavior are refreshing and intriguing. There was just the right amount of tension during our protagonist's escape. Great job! I look forward to the next chapter :)
Damn you cliff hanger!
Chance of vaporization by Luna 5%
Chance of vaporization by Celestia 95%
This is one of the 'Oh. Fuck.' Moments.
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Nah its more of a, "I just fucked the presidents daughter, and now he wants my hide."
great chapter now i hope I can fall asleep as i try to not think about what i would do in his place (if i do sleep will not come and it almost noon)
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Gotta love that saying.
That's always an option. But then there are those moments that are so bad, they can be called 'Reaper' moments. His is somewhere between 'Oh hell, I just ended the world' and 'if I don't speak carefully I will meet the all maker pretty quickly' at this time.
I can't wait for the next chapter
6992281 it was at this moment, that he realized he had fucked up
6992281 I believe you're doing it wrong. It goes like this
Ahh, cliffhanger my old frienemy, we meet again. How's the wife and the kids? What was that? Why yes I am building a time machine, why you ask? Because I would like to out live you as soon as possible, but don't worry we will meet again, and again, and again....
Its back! Ohhh Ohhhh its magic, you knooooow
Can we haz moar?
Well, if he plays his cards right, he might be able to survive. After all, it's not been too long since they forgave an evil creature that went on a rampage but turned out to be someone good under bad circumstances... and she's right beside him.
Also, luna is best princess, but there's no little luna on the comment's interface
Good chapter!
I hope Applejack learns her lesson and the fear of possible bashing can be laid rest. Also, I hope Aeron is going to bring up Lieutenant(?) "Prick's" flippant attitude towards Princess Luna in the coming discussion. That should be fun!
Please update soon, I can't handle all of this excitement!
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No, you're doing it wrong, it goes like this:
might I remind the princess she has already essentialy tourtured a sentient being for a considerable time, you consider him a monster or not if you continue to act in any form of aggressiveness and well, the other nations of equis may just say that celestia is falling into tyranny, these things lead to war you know.
if celestia has any real sense of justice, she can't punish him anymore, to do so would be to say the actions she had scientists and twilight perform where justified, and on a sentient, there never justifiable.
Gah! So exiting! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
OOOOOHH! Snap! Looking forward to the next chapter.
"You got 1 min to explain before i will eradicate you"
YaY
Damn, competent guards. A rare phenomenon.
God damn cliffhangers!
6992517 i would expect 1second.
6992261 damn it to hell and even that wouldn't be good enough.
No one in the comments section seems bothered by the fact that Luna just tried to quietly murder something capable of dreaming, based on several vague leaps of logic.
Applejack, shame on you, you are best pony, not red neck pony.
MOAR I say!!
6992669 Well, considering she believes it is something of her own making, think of it like an encounter with a pit bull you trained but had gone and mauled someone to death.
Well, this is going to be interesting. I can't wait
Upper body of a human, lower body of a pony, ending up like a plant centaur. I imagine him looking like Cenarius from WoW.
In the next chapter, Aaron should tell Celestia about that pompous prick.
I retract the issue I raised last chapter about no one going to check on Zecora. Seems I was silly and completely spaced on the time setting of the story and forgot that she wasn't approached yet by the town. Woops!
Also, very interesting spin on the Luna/Nightmare Moon aspect. It's one of the more unique interpretations about their origins and I'm really enjoying it!
Keep up the good work. ^^
6992669 Very true. Though in her defense, she is still seems to be recovering from the whole 'Nightmare Moon Incident' and she is likely not thinking clearly right now.
Not sure if I like it, that they seems to respect her less than Celestia, even if they got their orders. But they probably stil don´t trust her.
I´m happy for what our main char did in this story, and I suddenly forgot his name. I like what he did for Luna there, and I think I understood the situation the right way.
Well nice chapter, I like where this is going, even if it looks like Zecora is only unconscious because we ask to many questions about her in the last chapter.
It doesn´t matter right now, I´m just happy that it turned out okay more or less.
I enjoyed this chapter.
6992367 lol what movie is that from?
Ah, life and it's proverbial school buses. I know how that goes.
6992718 But if it was a pit bull you trained then you own it and know that you trained it, she just leapt to assuming with no hard evidence that she had created it and decided that it needed to die. That's a pretty major difference. That would be like going to the pound, seeing one growl at a child and shooting it on the spot.
6992818 I really don't know. All i know is that all credit from the scene the clip was in goes to something called WKUK. Oh and it was displayed on a channel called IFC.
more more more i want more please
Bah, I dont believe she will vaporize him, he's too similar to Twilight's cutie mark story. The only real difference is Twilight was stopped before anything permanently bad happened.
Love your story and thanks for sharing it, made my day to see it update!
Two things.
1.) Fuck you, you speciest!
2.) Great job mate.
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Eh, it's really just him being a victim of
Discordcircumstances, miscommunication, and assumptions which makes for an exciting, drama-filled story. It is curious how vindictive some comments are against Celestia, Luna, and other ponies when no one knows the whole story. Well, except the readers and Mr.Evergreen.Top 4 best insults. (Not in order)
1: douche canoe.
2: you spoon.
3: fanny bandit.
4: you makabaka (not a fucking clue, my mate just randomly shouted it down his Xbox mic.)
Let's hope he has wood that's evolved to be fire resistant.
6993240 Meh I just don't like how Celestia assumes that what he did was on purpose and of his own choosing.
NP dude it's still awesome and as long as it's not dead XD
Guess that explains why Zercora wasn't trying to help...
6992422 fear not I have no intention of turning applejack into some racist hick, thats not how she is. She just serves the role of mouthpiece for the collective distrust of the town at the moment. The whole issue will solve itself soon, then AJ can go back to being awesome
6992539 It always bugged me how the guard seem to be pretty much useless. I won't have that in my story. That isn't to say they don't have their share of idiots and dead weights. But for every Lieutenant prick there's a Star Horn or Sergeant Fire Shot to make up for it