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I felt it was time for a new bio, but don't know what to write. Maybe something philosophical? Umm...? Hmm.... Whoops! Look at that!! I seem to have run out of characters!! Remember to Stay Beautiful!

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What happens when the beloved Grandpa character by Brandon Rogers goes to Equestria? Let's find out!!

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Oh. My. Celestia.

YES. :rainbowlaugh:

This is terrific.

6796324 Thank you so much!! :rainbowkiss: I always wanted to write a comedy and saw an extreme lack of Grandpa on this site. So I was like "Why not?"

I'm glad you enjoyed! Prepare your body for more!

P.S. Thanks for the fave as well!! ;D

Where the butt sex?! WHERE?! Dislike :trollestia:

i was waiting for someone to make a HiE about a grumpy old man in Equestria. I was originally gonna make a character like that in my story, but went with a gung-ho guy instead.

Hats off to ya. Made me laugh. Keep up the good work.

6796843 Can do will do!! Glad you enjoyed it ^_^!! But I can't take credit for this character. He was created by Brandon Rogers in a few comedy sketches on his channel. Very hilarious sketches!!

6796843 Can do will do!! Glad you enjoyed it ^_^!! But I can't take credit for this character. He was created by Brandon Rogers in a few comedy sketches on his channel. Very hilarious sketches!!

Comment posted by Fading Soul deleted Jan 4th, 2016

6797705 Much appreciated!! Hopefully next chapter will bring it up to an 11!! :rainbowkiss:

It quite relaxing to read it. Your story brings joys to my heart.

6798212 Glad to know my story brings you happiness :D!!

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Since I first saw the title, thats all I was waiting for

Its perfect

6803761 Let's get real for a moment. How do you like this adaptation of the videos? It is a bit difficult to write because in the videos there is no build up to anything. Just random jumps from scene to scene with a joke or humorous quip thrown in there. They are hilarious!! But I am not sure if my story can live up to its expectations. I am trying to stay true to the videos while also trying to think of my own jokes to put in there. And I have to say, Brandon Rogers is a genius.

This stuff is HARD!!

6803863

I don't doubt the difficulty in writing this

You're following the source material really well, (quick cuts from scene to scene with Grandpa spouting something really inappropriate as a reaction something he does, or something someone says to him)

There's not really too much you can do with that, but you've done well this far, and as long as you keep it short I think it'll be fine.

6804097 Okay :), thank you! That is actually very really relieving to hear (err... read :twilightsheepish:). Anyways, this story isn't going to be NEAR as long as my other stories. There is about 2-3 chapters left, but there will (hopefully) be a few chuckles here and there in the chapters. :D!!

Just at that moment, Grandpa's flashlight died. "Fuck," he cursed, looking down at the busted tool and smacking it, hoping that would get it to turn back on. No such luck.

Chloretta! The god damn flashlight's broken again! Where we keep the spare?

I saw it in the oldest one's room!

The smile immediately returned to his face, thanked her, and ran off.

Just a dangling modifier I saw. In here it sounds like the smile is the one doing the actions. :twilightsheepish: Might want to fix that.

Funny chapter, as usual! :rainbowwild:

6811309 Yeah, I saw that in editing, but I didn't fix it because I assumed people would know it's the colt thanking Rarity :twilightsheepish:. But perhaps you're right... I'll go in and fix it

And thank you for the nice and polite comment :)!! It's rare to see those nowadays...

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Hmm, really? Most people here on Fimfiction are pretty nice. There are, of course, bad eggs, but they're usually not mean to just be mean. Have you had lots of experiences with rude people lately?

6813901 Not lately, but I have had some bad experiences in the past

Yeah, there is a chance that my maternal Grandpa would be like this on a bad day. Pretty good! I just felt that the beginning was a bit too rushed.

8.25/10 from me!!

6820893 How so? I need to know what is making it so depressing so I can make it 'less' depressing :twilightsmile:

6821087 Yeah, the beginning is rushed, but that was only so we could get to the GOOD stuff :)! This is a story for laughs and chuckles, without that much of a story. I made this to bring a smile to people's faces :D!

I think I've succeeded at that so far :3.

P.S. Thank you for the nice words and generous rating~:heart:

6821154 Oh no not like that! :twilightoops: I just meant that they're stuck with him, even though they clearly don't want it. It's depressing, but it's a hilarious kind of depressing.

6821566 Ooohhh, okay!:pinkiehappy: I thought the story was taking a sad turn and I was all like "....where?"

But nevermind, glad you cleared that up ^-^!!

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But it's healthy! And grandpa likes references to it, inappropriate references... :trollestia:

Candy!

What?! No grandpa candy shenanigans! D:

6870418 What isn't said is the most important thing in this chapter. Instead of being limited to what I could have potentially written, now there is an unlimited amount of possibilities that could have occured. All you need is a little imagination :)

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