Harmony is always working toward her goals.
Not all of her pawns are aware of the fact that they are pawns.
Starswirl, a sacrifice toward the Plan.
Twilight, the results of the Plan.
Two mortal lifetimes ended. A plan millions of years in the making entering the endgame.
Pawns may be weak, but they can be promoted...
This is an experiment in trying to write a story heavily mixed with world building. If I fail to tell a compelling story, then at least I can learn from my mistakes. The fact that it is an experement is why I tagged it [Random]
Set in the far past, during Magical Mystery Cure, and the far future.
I might come back and re-write this someday.
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Weren't the two previous ones also mixed with quite a bit of worldbuilding? It's interesting nonetheless. Looking forward to see what else you write. By the way, small typo,
Seeing as to how the story is in past tense I think 'built' works better. Until next time,
-Sphinx
P.s. No clue why the comment is underlined, I can't stop it.
6984122 Thanks for the catch.
The other stories are roughly 10% world building. This felt like it was at least 25% world building when I was writing it.
Your comment is not underlined on my screen. Maybe an issue with your browser? Maybe a momentary glitch in the system?
6984155 I think that the ratios would be a little higher since they all revolved around the world of the Sundered Goddess. Since the Sundered Goddess had a fair major role in your previous stories, along with this one, it should be more than 10-25%. Wouldn't be 80-100% either. Personally I would say somewhere around the 30-50% range. Anyways, still love the world your building. Can't wait to see more of it. Until next time,
-Sphinx
Huh, not underlined anymore. Guess, must have been a glitch or something...
A lovely triptych of death and rebirth. One for Star Swirl, one for Twilight, and one for the universe itself.