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A Gift From A Friend

for those who don’t know. The Cutie Mark Chronicles is the twenty-third episode of the first season of My Little Pony Friendship is Magic. In this episode, the Cutie Mark Crusaders learn how each of the Mane Six acquired their cutie marks. At Applejack’s flash back we saw a rainbow leading to her house. But where did the Rainbow end?

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GeoPony1982

GeoPony1982 #1 · Dec 31st, 2015 · 1 · ·

Not exactly a bad little story, but you seriously need an editor. All of the blatant errors which should have been picked up by most word processing applications were pretty jarring.
I think that to many avid readers such as myself, flaws like the ones here are akin to running headlong into a mental brick wall.

Don't stop trying, practice makes perfect.

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