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sneakpeak321


You know that one moment when you think of something awesome to write. Only to come in realization half ways done, it isn't such a great idea. Yea, I have a lot of those.

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The Elements of Harmony, objects of peace, items of pure harmony.
Is that really what the Elements really are? Pure good.

Nah, that doesn't sound right. How is turning a living creature to stone good? Worse... sending a pony to the moon for a thousand years?

There has to be more behind these Elements... right? There not just all for shooting rainbow beam?

There so much more questions to ask, but so many hidden secret about the Elements. So much power hidden behind them. Enough secret it should have spark the curiosity of the curious Twilight Sparkle.

But no, not once has she study the Elements close and personal.

It a question why powerful creature never try to steal them, it was said any object that hold powerful energy could bring ruins to the world. Shouldn't that mark the Elements as well? Shouldn't the power from the Elements corrupt minds? Aren't the Elements desirable for power?

They sure as hell are. So it bring us to our last question.

Who wants that power?

The awesome cover image is by oX-Deso-Xo

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I hope flutter shy beat it up.

This seems like an amazing start :twilightsmile:

Helpful Hint:
Spell check yourself and maybe have a friend do so as well. The few misspellings I came across weren't so major as to make me loose the story but still its a pet peeve of mine

Yea, I read my work over and over, checking if there any misspell. No matter how many times I check, in the end I know there going to be a comment telling me there a misspelling.

I really wish I had an editor.

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