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I found this very amusing.
Holy shit... this is actually amazing. I expeted it to be good with the like/dis-like ratio, but this is amazing. Definite fave material after I read all the current chapters, but there's so many...
Whatever shall I do?
You know what comes after 69 kiddos................... mouthwash
Damn, ousted buy Luna. aw well...
Well i havent laughed that hard EVER, thanks for confirming i have asthma thoughh
7246961 My favourite position is actually 68: you suck me off and I owe you one
Hmmm... first:
But then this follows,
Doesn't that contradict her earlier question?
Why'd she ask of Earth when she already knew about 'thousands' of other humans? This would imply that she must have heard from other humans what our planet is and how it's called.
Then again, why ask such redundant question at all? Why 'questioning' him in the first place and not simply put her demands and expectations on the table? After all, she already knows from his dreams that he is a human. So why not rather immidiatly get to the point and tell him what he is allowed to do and whatever not, making absolutely clear when she, and Celestia, will be cross with him, if he were to break certain laws?
Also that question if he's a 'threat' to them or pony kind, is one of those I can't stand in most of other stories as well.
I mean if you get asked by a clearly more powerful then you Alicorn Alpha "Are you a threat?", what would you answer?
"Sure princess, I be the threat that takes over Equestria and steal your crown, then feast on your pony folk."
... *slowly scowling alicorn readies magical moon canon*
Not really a good idea, aye?
Nobody would do that, so it's also a kind of redundant question (unless he were to be some kind of evil dark overlord, who generally love to ramble and boast of their fiendish intentions, which he is NOT).
He is some dude trapped in a little fillies body... also an information Luna should have already extracted from his dreams.
Additionally, why tell him he'd be under a 'lie detection spell', which is obviously a dozen times better then a mechanical lie detector, before asking the questions, plus unnecessarily telling him to be honest?
I mean gee, wonder what would happen if he wasn't giving honest answers while this spell is active? Maybe the spell would tell her that he's lying? I dunno, should he try out?
So why question him at all? Why not just give him the ultimatums he is gonna get anyway?
Set the ground rules from how he is supposed to act and chose from now on, and leave him the choice to get send back home. That's all.
Given the fact that Luna has both, explicit information on humans and his dream, this whole 'questioning with lie detector spell' spiel seems... well... unfitting.
Instead it would be better if she went straight to the point with him, declare herself alpha alicorn and make sure to 'threatten' him accordingly, so that he is to make no misteps/mishaps/misdeeds in her sight (i.e. harming her subjects.)
Maybe it's just me, but I'm really not satisfied with this part.
Anyway reading on.
What the fuck did I just read
Jesus Christ it hurts to read.
7795738 it hurts the remainder of my innocence
7859175 Priceless!
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I think Luna is asking a rhetorical question, a way to cause Rose to slip up in some way or prepare for an explanation. It is quite apparent that she already knows and is just probing for reactions, for which she got.
You are not a bad author, but I just find no enjoyment in reading this. Cheers.
Oh god its gonna be this cliche story.1 mc becones swearing foal and everyone loses their shit, 2luna dreamspying 3 are you a treat sentance because reasons 4 mc oh pity me. 5 ridiculus answer to princess. Whats next?
Man she’s loyal.
Is that why she wants to be a guard? Maybe she can be the thestral guard’s pet.
That also made me think of this.
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