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Your right. It is a weird chapter.
.....Though not entirely unwelcome.
Definitely pushing that teen rating
nice chapter
Either Winter ascends to alicornhood or Celestia falls into madness. Also, isn't it arc not arch?
7166385 It's Arch.
had to google it.
7166399 When I google story arch it asks if I mean story arc.
7166428 Huh. well that's weird. but meh
Edit: I just typed in Arc and Arch and didn't add story. Meh, to lazy to fix it.
7166458 I vote we blame society for making english complicated and be done with it.
7166480 Agreed.
I think that something will happen to Winter that makes her go on a turbo blood rage. Most likely against Celestia but maybe someone else.
You know who needs some screen time?
Spring n Autumn
And you call that weird, it's down right tame and only bordering on the kinky level.
Weird would've been using Wolhana's shadow portal to open a rift and tongue fuck/fist Azrael's cervix while using a portal in her mouth so Azrael is making out with Wolhana's
There, a glimpse in an asian's fetish level
And I can't teach you our ways, we are like Cthulhu, in your mind's eye it seems awesome but you'll only burn your eyes at the true vision...
7166680 Really? You want to have a Kink War? Alright! Challenge accepted.
I would have had Wolhana make multiple versions of herself with the Shadow Clone Jutsu spell of both Azrael and herself. The Two Wolhana would pin both Azrael's down with Shadow chains in a hot 69 and forced them both to eat each other out while they penetrate each other anally while in a 69 position too. They would make a shadow portal into each Azrael's vaginas and make out with both of them while being inside all four of them, all the while the Wolhana's tails are pumping in and out of both Azrael's butts and into both of their butts.
My Naughty Cthulhu is better than yours.
7166716 Oh you lovely child, I only spoke the minimum
Shadow clones, and Azrael suspended in the air by locking her limbs through portals up to the shoulders and hips as the clones torture her with caressing licks and kisses on her feet, rubbing themselves along her arms and legs, while using her hands to finger two. That's just limbs, now for the first course :} One clone each for the breasts, one for her stomach and belly button, another for sucking and occasionally biting the neck; and another pair working Azrael's wings, and one pair works on her ass cheeks. Now for the main course :} While this in happening, an orgy of clones surround the scenes, filling the air with their moans as the kiss and tail fuck each other. Portals at the end of their uterus' send tails from a few of each through to Azrael's pussy/ass/throat. Desert time :} At the point of climax, multiple portals open in front of Azrael's urethra, leading to the earlier points and above, finishing the session with quite the splash :}
7166716 And don't get me started on shape shifting jutsu, genjutsu, summoning jutsu- you'd be reading a story in itself :3
Hold the hell up...
I thought Wolhana was mute?!
7166860 Most understandings of mute is that the throat is incapable of producing articulate sounds to warrant speech, due to damage in the larynx from either congenital defects or injury in the course of their life. Mewling and other, primal sounds, don't require the need of the voice box.
*Edit, if you're referring to the point where she and Azrael spoke, author goofed
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No, I know she can still make noises, however...
This says 'cheered' meaning she clearly spoke.
Mind explaining?
Ooh wild speculation time
Guess 1/Final line: She has a snow ball fight.
Guess 2/Final Paragraph: Winter steps down as leader so she can be a filly/live as herself in peace.
Guess 3/DBZ: Since you said "Rose" and not which one Winter takes a big hit from Tia to save Arcadia, Summer
goes Super Sayan(ie goku v freeza fight) turns into the Alicorn of War and pastes Tia. Winter revives as the Alicorn of peace to stop the fight/save Tia (shes already said Tia dying would be bad) because while I've been assuming Winter=War she's been constantly trying to stop the coming war.7166860 Ops. ..ahhhh... She sometimes talk...ahhhhhhhh..... fuck.
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Maybe, unbeknownst to us, Luna was able to pull some bibbity-bibbity Alicorn shit and fixed her muteness.
*winks*
7167994 you dun fucked up.
7166799 Welp, it's off to Pornhub for a little while.
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7168186 Fixed
Will she be getting a visit from a certain 'Prince of Darkness'? :D
7168464 ...No... Maybe next time
my guess is that equestria will go to war. thousands die. Rose attacks canter-lot.
latter at the eend rose fights celestia. and mid to the end fight. She becomes aAlicorn
7169352 Nope, sorry. Try again.
7169358 Rose takes over/annexes equestria?
7169391 Nope, one last try.
7169412 ur make up some random shit half way thew u righting the last chapter. That will have have everybody. thinking what the hell is this .
7169423 No, not really. I already have the Grand final written in stone, but since this may be a bit hard to figure out. Here is the only hint. "One of the big 7 Dies, Celestia gets rainbow cannoned. and Arcadia takes over two certain countries."
7169430 Dude summer better not die or Winter. Anyone else is fine with me.
7167973 the more and more I think about this comment the more and more sense it makes, especially if you look at it from a thematic standpoint in context to their names and cutie marks. (SHE HAS OLIVE BRANCHES IN HER CUTIE MARK)
This story is so goddamn absurd I couldn't stop reading for awhile, as it approached levels on par with a 200 + car trainwreck all sliding off the rails simultaneously as it passed through a densely populated town and warehouse district... filled with flammable materials and hazardous waste that would create the most wondrous explosions as it all caught fire and then kept going... and going... and going.
Now, analogy aside, this story suffers deeply from an acute case of Mary Sue Syndrome With Tragic Backstory That Conquers Everything In Their Pathâ„¢ that is just... one button win hit over and over and over again as the situation escalates and escalates with no true climax in sight. Just... wow. I'm not saying the story is bad, mind you, although there are quite a few errors and missing words present, but... Cripes.
7175456 Yeah, should go back to fix those easy mistakes when I'm not being too lazy... and thanks for the analogy. It means a lot...Not really, sorta. I don't what to think really, but thanks anyway!
Edit: Just saw the Story Approver thing, and I have to say this one, little, thing:
"SENPAI NOTICED ME!"
That is all.
7175456 It was weird wasn't it?
At first you stepped into this story seeing an uncommon twist, the mounting tensions of a character giving normalcy the bird but then slip down a winding slide of "WTF?!?! " while barely holding on to your suspension of disbelief.
Then asking yourself, "How the hell did I get to the current chapters?"
7178959 ....Well, when you say it like that. It sounds like Rose is one step away from becoming Link, the hero of Chaos. Lol
Well...I like the story enough but I want to stop at this point...Celestia got rekt. and i kinda want it to end there as things are starting to get a bit complicate.
My guess: Winter dies, Summer lives and gets put on the throne, Celestia gets turned into Daymare Sun or something, and Summer takes over the Crystal Empire and Equestria for revenge.
And now I just want to sit here and repeatedly hit the two buttons. Decisions decisions.
Was listening to this song while reading this chapter. Can't help but think it should be your readers mantra.
Now I just have to decide if 1.25 speed is fitting for the more intense scenes.
I don't care about Mary Sueisums as as long as the story is entertaining.
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I know right? Same here. Its really tempting.
My guess is winter will become a human again
I wanna see the planet blow up, and everyone die the most brutal death imaginable.
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Some people just wanna watch the world burn