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I hope those looks of horror where toward the injuries that she resceved not toward her killing the dogs
Aoutch ,,,thats not good.
Chicks dig scars, but if they cant mend and restore that eye then Rose will bee having problems with her ranged air attacks and dog-fighting (Ha!) when she loses most if not all of her depht perception. Not a good thing to lose for a flying creature that travels fast trou the air and need to judge distance (try closing 1 eye and read its freaky).
But this is the magical land of talking ponys so maybee they got a solution.
And the horror for killing the dogs ?, I personaly dont think so. With a swat cheif and a Sky-Captian of a elite military branch with the standing orders about killing humans in cold blood, and beeing in close proximity to 2 demi-god class ageless entitys (Spitfire). I would say, nervus maybee fearful ath the most, for a little time ahead.
When I read this, I thought about this...pbs.twimg.com/media/B8mZ_3FIcAAGLAZ.jpg
Did she hit that dank mc twisty flop
i would read the side story
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-Ru
YES PLEASE!!!!!!!
i don't know why but in the middle of the fight scene i just had the urge to hear this:
So op
Hell yes i'd read the side story! Hot sexy action? Who could say no?
The rest of it I could handle, but this is a bit excessive. At least tell me she gets a scar instead of calling magic bullshit.
Look, there are plenty of things done well in this story. Sadly, its beginning to feel like a self insert mary sue designed to help you jack off to yourself. I enjoyed parts of the story, the world building was fine, but you tried to hard to make the character untouchable. Congratulations, she is, I dont think I would want to touch her with a ten foot pole. Keep writing, you have things to work on but you seem talanted enough to learn.
Hitch-Hikers Guide to The Galaxy.
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42 is my lucky number!!!!
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not 63?
Clop clop clop
42
Yes.