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Big Mac just turned eighteen and is just about achieve his dream of owning the family farm, but a message from his late father might lead him down a different path as he learns the truth about his father and his own heritage and what he must do keep his family safe.
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Whoa.
This is heavy man!
6769316 The entire thing or just certain parts?
6769797 All of it
What Nico Vega could have say to his son in the last tape:
That’s all I have Mac. Do want you need to do. Keep them safe Mac.
And i'm so sorry to ask that to you,i love you my son.
Couldn't he just have say that?
Now it just look like:I did bad things,protect your sis...and that's all.And shoot down people.
Don't think that's the best conclusion of a letter from a father to his son.
except that good job^^
6769937 I see, is that good or bad?
6770418 I guess he could say that. I'll have to read that part again, because I thought I worded that a little differently. I guess that's what I get for finishing the story at 2 am on Christmas.
6770755 Good of course
6770781 Thanks good to hear.
I'm planning some follow up stories, following Mac and his journey as a monster, if that interests you at all.
6770877 Sure am, looking forward to how it'll affect the Aj Big Mac relationship from now on
6770921 I'm glad to hear that, it'll be a little bit before I can get to writing on it, got some details to hammer out, but it shouldn't be too long. Also thanks for the watch and if you feel like it you can check out my story Night Patrol, where Nico originally comes from. The stories are meant to be interconnected. Kind of new concept I'm trying out, I hope people will enjoy it.
pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaes be another part
6771083 Yes there is another part coming
Unlikely to read, but I'd like to suggest that you learn how to use sequel tagging. It exists for a reason, and this story appears to need to be tagged as a sequel. Or, at the very least, learn how to format links correctly and don't use that ASCII arrow junk in your description. It just looks bad.
6779627 Alright sound advice, how do you use Sequel tagging? I'm not well versed on that kind of stuff.
6780397 There's a whole big explanation somewhere on the site if you look hard enough, but here's how it works:
When you're creating a new story (or editing an existing one), you'll see a field that says "Prequel ID". By default it has a 0 in it.
Notice how between /story/ and the title of your story in the URL, there's a number? Should be five or six digits? Go to the first story. Copy that number. Paste it into the "Prequel ID" field of the sequel story. Hit "Save Changes". And that should do it.
6780446 Thanks for explaining.
This was kick ass!!
6884650 Thank you, there's a part two if you interested.
6885717 reading it now
Clothes.
Why do none of the stories in this series have a violence tag?