sequel to How Starlight Glimmer Actually Reformed
Starlight Glimmer is now Twilight's daughter!
But how does this effect the elements of harmony and Equestria?
First thing's first, Twilight will have to tell her parents about their sudden granddaughter. Then they're going to have to talk to both princesses about the new legal princess who happens to be an ex-villain. Hopefully her brother and sister in law will understand. Then there's Twilight's friends, the town Starlight controlled, and many problems only the elements of harmony can handle.
Sometimes she wishes she could go back to the days where she raised a young filly, Starlight...
Chapters (9)
Lol a mother's intuition can detect temporal anomalies. This is entertaining stuff you got here. Keep up the good work.
Vary good story can't give it a thumbs up at this time for my tablet seems to be stupid
Next would be Celestia and Luna meeting a now beautiful Twilight and possibly new Princess Starlight.
Interesting
And Spike is definitely Night Light's grandson
Good chapter though I do feel it may have bash Celestia a bit much. But whatever, keep up the good work.
And then celestia falls in love whit twilight
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And get in fight with several stallions and maybe a few mares, like the Elemental Barrers.
6818296 yeah just to get to twilight
Finally Luna gets one over Celestia.
If Starlight Glimmer is going to be made a princess on the grounds that she's the daughter of Twilight Sparkle, what about Prince Spike?
Joking as she and Luna may be at the end, Celestia really fucked up. If she doesn't fix it quick, then serious damage could be done with their relationship.
Twilight and family is in Canterlot for the week so Celestia has time to fix things....
But I have a problem with how... Meh Twilights parents was to the news, I expected them to be upset that they never got to see or even spend time with Starlight as she was growing up. So many birthdays missed... One grand child they never got to spoil...
Oh well the story is not complete so I'll see where it goes from here!
I wonder how Sunset will react to Twilight's newfound beauty?
I love the Ghostbusters reference.
I love this story what going to happen next it is so touching and cute. Love the story I hope to see more.
Indeed.
He does have a point...
Awesome, even if you bashed Celestia a little
, good work.
Can't wait for Shining and Cadence to find out.
Great work so far, well done.
Love the story, hope you keep up the work.
Are you going to do a spiceal for the EQG:Friendship Games or you are just doing the show?
Considering what we have seen her daughter do, I don't doubt it.
Nice chapter, good work.
Interesting love the chapter can't wait to read the reactions of the other characters like Cadance, Shining Armor. Oh and what will happen with Celestia and Twilight.
7029282 I'm considering a mention of Sunset via that book they use to talk to each other but it may or may not happen depending on how I can fit it into the story.
Of course Luna isn't doing this to get back a, celly. Nope.
Definitely not....
No grudge match here.... nope..... I feel bad for Twilight. Her mom and father were jerks to start and Celestia was, a BIG BUTT!
Great, so Starlight is now playing match h maker?
Cadence is gonna flip a table...
So...when is this going to be updated again?
I read the comic the previous story was based on. I laughed so hard.
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You could have it as twilight gets a message from sunset and decides to bring starlight along as both a lesson in friendship aswell as to explain things to sunset and her human world friends.
And when they go through the portal twilight comes out the other end as a full grown adult confusing everyone at first as she hasn't explained things to them.
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6950080 I think he supports the New Lunar Republic.
7290990 And spike is now either a Labrador or a German Shepherd.
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Or just a larger leaner version of his canine form
Sweet, another chapter.
So, the duel reminded me of Avatar: The Last Air Bender. And I gotta agree with Starlight. What did we miss?!
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Uh, pretty sure you meant "duel" and "duelest". Saying it was dullest says it was boring.
I was kinda confused until I realised that you meant duel and duelist instead of dull and dullest. Dull = boring
A pony version of Toph, look like things are get good
You might want to take another look at this line, as it doesn't seem to make sense...
“I barely know anyone there!”
Sunny’s eyes widened as the fireball hit her.
Starlight thought of a few ways to finish this fight.
I can’t breathe!”
Celestia was bound in a ribbon tied in a bow.
“Explaining Sexual Preferences by Princess Cadence.”
In what possible way is that important to the story itself? Sure, it's an interesting little factoid, but I don't see how it contributes to the actual plot of the story, unless of course you do something ridiculous to make it important to the plot of the story...please don't. I like this story so far.
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7348044 I'd like to thank both of you for directing me to the flaws.
Ya Toph some how she made it to ponyland and is acting cool about it. Now if the others of Team Avatar(Last Air Bender) makes a cameo that whould take the cake.
Nice chapter as always
Earth Bending for the win!
you see what I did there?in all seriousness, good job so far...I got a real Sans and Papyrus vibe from Luna and Celestia, respectively. They were the best part of the chapter.
I never saw you around Canterlot and I’m positive someone would’ve recognized you in Ponyville.”
There have been monster sightings in that area.”
“I know it was embarrassing back then with your little friends but they’re still good for the party.”
Is it bad that when I hear the name Raven, I automatically think of this Raven?
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“Is this supposed to be amusing?”
Sure, one time that led to a thousand year banishment..
It’s supposed to do that to the present. Something tells me that while Twilight does like like mares, she only like likes Celestia. Even with how Celestia was totally jealous of her.
Heh. The dungeon, she says...
Awesome work, keep it up.
A many were disappointed that Twilight wasn't into mares, not just because she wasn't pared with Moon Dancer, it was because it ruined 90% of the ships with Twilight Sparkle. Beware.
Spike no longer having a crush on rarity or even slightly in love.... yeah right.