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The bearded teddy bear
Tall, broad shoulders, short dark hair, or no hair, light skin, a bearded mountain man to be frank. That or a teddy bear. :3
The bearded teddy bear
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I loved it, and require more my good sir! Have a like, favorite and a follow! And also a moustache.
The oddest kind of enjoyable.
Adorable cover art!
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All props to the artist.
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Oh? How so if i might ask. I'm curious as to what made you enjoy it and how you found it odd.
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I'm glad you liked it. Any thoughts you would like to share. And anything else you'd like to see in the future ;3
6759745 I enjoyed it because of the descriptors and how it was all paced out - unlike a lot of clop it had an enjoyable degree of story accompanying it; it felt more like a story with clop rather than vice-versa. As for how I found it odd, that's more of a personal thing; foalcon/bulges are two of my closet-fetishes {not so much these days i suppose}, to my great shame. It's odd in the sense that I immensely enjoyed it despite the deep feeling that I shouldn't have. So...odd on a personal level I suppose.
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I see. Well my good sir or miss. There is no need for shame. There are many who share the thought that innocence and size diffirence are deeply attractive. There is nothing wrong with enjoying it as long as it brings harm to none.
And if things turn out well. You night find some more taboo themes related to these two. Maybe you can expand your 'shameful' pleasures.
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Words can't explain how much good it does me to hear someone else say {type} that.
Omg I love this story <3
I liked this, good story. I'd like to see more.
I normally don't comment on fictions like this but this typo is just so out of place.
Not Odin's bread D:
The story kinda crash ended.
There was a lot that you could have went into more depth with in regards to their relationship, namely, their age difference, and the issues it might cause in Equestria.
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FIRST??!!
It seems too much in quality be a first one!
some typos where the misspelling of "libido" and sure if you meant Odins beard instead of bread.
found more but im lazy.
Not bad i like this OC. could read naughty one shots later if you decide to make more. The clop was really good.
One thing left unanswered was if they decide to become a couple later on ponies will question their relationship since for all the town knows they are father and daughter. Seem like a sequel could go a sad route too.
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It crash ended for a reason. Other I'd go on for ages and throw on an other five or six thousand words laced with repetition and eventual points of plot. Instead I decided to cut it short, so I don't runt the risk of writing without purpose.
Also I'm saving some of the potential there is between the two. Age, taboo desires left in the open, both their pasts. Things that can wirl their head around other fics I write.
So your a lazy bastard... I have NOTHING but the highest hopes for you my lazy compadre
I love this story so far and this is to good to be your first clopfic
6762943 Will there be a sequel? Because that ending was the perfect way to say a sequel will happen.
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Probably, I won't say it for sure. Because i know myself to well to make promises like that. Since I'm an utter piece of shit when it comes to commitment to my projects. But There are several squeals and shortish stories involving these two floating around in my head.
With some luck, And a bit of determination on my part. You'll see more from me.
6773349 Even if it is not a sequel or any relations to this story or the characters, I look forward to seeing more from you. Also I hope you had a happy whatever it is that you celebrate and a happy new years.
Good...
I DEMAND A SEQUEL....WITH BLACKJACK AND HOOKERS!
This is very sexy. There are quite a few minor errors, but nothing that truly detracts from the story. The cervical penetration caught me off guard, but that was about the only thing I personality disliked.
This was very good in terms of clop. The descriptions of orgasms for Petal has to be my favorite part. I also really love anatomically correct, the reason I started my group in the first place, so the winking descriptions really were great to me.
As I said in my previous comment, this story does have a few spelling and grammatical errors, but nothing another edit couldn't fix.
Great work, the story was 10/10. However as many of your other readers have stated you really need to get an editor to work on the spelling and grammar errors. Your most common error is typing "into" as two words...
as well as placing
where than should go. Other than that only novice mistakes littered here and there, but keep up the good work.
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As a explanation for these mistakes, not an excuse, I suffer from Dyslexia. A fight I've had to fight tirelessly through many years to get to even this point of literacy in a second language.
I will not hide away my own blame behind his label, there are many more things I could me much better at, and they'll come the more I write and read. But understand that things like that often can occur. Hence my need for an editor.
I very often struggle with the difference of to and too. And like you pointed out. Then and Than. More practice and simple hammering in of the knowledge needed for it to sit properly. I'll try and groom the story myself, but if you have someone you, or anyone else can put me in to contact with. That'd be great.
Thank you and happy new years^^
6784846 Oh, don't mistake my criticism for hostility. I read your profile and full understand your condition and I understand that learning a new language in it's entirety is very difficult. I was simply stating an editor would be your best friend in this case. Be careful who you take it to though, some editor groups shoot people down who have numerous small errors for any reason.
“By Odin's bread...”
I fucking died...
I like it. You did a really good job creating a character, and the emotions were felt as I read. Keep it up, I wanna see more
Also, lost it at celestia's beard.
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these people don't know about odin bread.
This story was certainly a journey, and I can't wait to see more whenever you're ready to write it.
6810321 DAMMIT! Why can I only like this once!?
Never said what her butt picture ended up being...
A few errors, like when he opens the door 'too' the outside, Rainbow yelling look out 'Bellow' and the filly turning beet 'read'
But damn dude, awesome first clopfic, this is looking to be a good read! :D
Mmmmm, soundstasty~
This is adorable, and I love it! And what even is her mark?! XD hahaha, nice work well done!
This is a story for the ages, awesome work on this man, awesome work. A few errors every now and then, but they can be overlooked, as this was awesome sauce.
Good work man, good work!
Still curious as to what her mark was, assuming that's what that was last chapter, with the flash of light.
Keep it up!
But what was the cutie mark?!?? 0.0
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Hehe, i must have written that part when i was really tired. Decided in my head what it would be and then gone to bed. Waking up and thinking i had written it. Regardless, It was suppose to be a small green leaf with droplets of morning dew on them. I'll correct that at once.
6773349 I know what you mean (You and me are alike) but do you think you will do a sequel : This story is AWESOME and REALY ?!! Your first clopfic ? If your first clopfic is like that, you will be a awesome writer (if you continue to write clop, that is). If you need an editor for any story I'll be happy to help you (if someone else want to be an editor chose him I am French so still have some difficulties but it's why I am here : to have a better English) Have a good day
DDLG, Daddy Doms Little Girl
I hope there's a sequel one day
Congratulations! You wrote a really beautiful story very well. This big brazilian fan of "mlp: fim" thanks!!