An archaeological discovery brings Twilight and her friends to a cave full of items and materials never before seen in Equestria. Despite their precautions, Twilight is abruptly brought to the Capital Wasteland. Her friends' whereabouts are unknown.
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I'll admit that the whole plotline with Glenn wasn't necessary. I let my past trauma push other story points to the wayside, causing things to become a contrived mess as I rushed to ending Glenn. I was too stubborn and angry at the real world and my past to just retcon the guy when I should have.
I needed something to vent my rage against.
My biggest fear of this whole thing is that I wasted your time and rushed plotlines (such as Twilight and Daniel's romance)
I'm not happy with the quality of what I've provided.
With that all said and done, I'm leaving things up to the audience. Are you fine with the story as it is? Or would you stick around if I redone about every chapter I've posted since coming back?
(edit: After having some time to talk to my friends about what happened/what's been going on with my life, as well as the feedback I've gotten so far, I feel emotionally stable/well enough to continue with the story as-is.)
i like the story as it is plz don't start over also have you played fire emblem three houses id like to see a fanfic for anyone who wants to use the idea where garrag magh and its inhabitants are displaced in Equestria during cadence and shining armor's wedding or a displaced story of a cosplayer who dressed up as eldegard at a convention and is sent to an anthro Equestria during season 3 episode 1
WOOHOO!
DUNWICH!
*Bounces around*
Love that place
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Thanks for the feedback.
To answer your question about Fire Emblem, I haven't played the games.
Dude, the story is fine as is, don't change a thing. If this helps you, at the very least, start working through some of your past trauma, then by all means, keep it up!
Don't fuck yourself up for the sake of your readers. If it's not mentally good for you to bring that all back up to the forefront, then don't, and if anyone complains about you not bringing it back up, direct them to the statement below:
"Get, and I can not express this emphatically enough, absolutely fucked."
My personal advice? Have Glenn get himself a couple high tier underlings he can work vicariously through. Maybe note as things go along, through his underlings, that he keeps doing more and more dangerous experiments, all while adding more character emphasis on the lackeys, until one day they note Glenn just sixed himself with an experiment.
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I wanted to say thanks for the understanding. However, after talking to my friends about it, I'm feeling a lot better about what happened. I feel mentally well enough to keep going with this story, even with Glenn still a part of it.
I must have missed it but where did Electrum and SOCOM first make there appearance?
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They were revealed a few chapters ago. Or at least hinted at. Twilight found her rune carvings in the Rockland Relay Station, and they were also in Raven Rock. They were runes to ward off extradimensional teleportation into the area the runes were placed. It was a response to Twilight accidentally causing the mirror to blow up and start opening portals between the worlds at the start of the story.
Tbh, I would be perfectly fine with an unceremonious death. I think it would be satisfying in a way that someone with so much power could get suddenly blindsided and go out with a whimper. Sorry of a "I did so much and went so far, but in the end it didn't even matter" kind of way. Very appropriate for an unforgiving Wasteland, but also a nice flip.
I find myself invested in the strifes of the characters, so I would be perfectly fine with seeing everyone trying to understand everything that has, is, and will be happening to them. Sort of a "What now?" sentiment, especially if Fluttershy's white whale is dead.
But those are just my thoughts, and it's possible you've already addressed this! This is what I get for being late to the party.