An archaeological discovery brings Twilight and her friends to a cave full of items and materials never before seen in Equestria. Despite their precautions, Twilight is abruptly brought to the Capital Wasteland. Her friends' whereabouts are unknown.
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Fair enough. I think most would prefer new content as well. It was just something that stuck out to me, especially when meeting fluttershy who seems like she's been battle hardened for years. Characterization I like for her quite a bit. Maybe some sort of time delay/dilation could have worked? Twilight slips through the mirror last, and those seconds turn into months or years? Not a huge deal though.
Huh, was expecting drunk sex followed by drama. Nice twist here with panic attack assistance. Good job, Dan.