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My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
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Bueno.
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Great story, but it could use with some touching with some of the spelling and punctuation.
I'll give it a meh out of ten, your writing could use just a little work, also I find something terribly awkward about putting lyrics to a song in a story, but that may just be me
I'm just wondering how the hell do people get pictures of OC ponies. HOW?!
Oh yah, good story bro.
EXCELANT STORY!
you done good you done good here have some cute
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... nice...
This fanfiction smacks of Twi and Me.
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I liked Twi and Me.
Your life will be spared... for now.
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Me Gusta
magnificent! very good one-shot
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Seriously though i really liked it!
Great job my friend and also favorited!
this is cute. gross but cute
I love ponies too
hot damn
Sappy ♪
oh well
Wait... If he's dating a matured Sweetie Belle, then how is he a year older then Pinkie? He would have to be a fair bit older then Sweetie wouldn't he?
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Well ages are possibly different because of the ages of a person or in this in the place ponys age so it might be well she is like 20(sweetie bell)
And pinkie is around 24 in this story so he might be 25
That was excelent. It made me happy
HNNNNNNG
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Ye, this is fairly good. However, the confession and sex scene feels a bit rushed, uncreative and quite frankly lacking in description. Everything else, such as the story itself and emotional value was very high. So yeah, my final review: Good up until the clop scene and very emotional...78%
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