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good chapter too...
like dad tangents with no point
I really do think you managed to catch the frustration he's got in here...
It was a joy to help you plan and create this.
~Skeeter The Lurker
i Gotta say side a was the best maybe a sequel? keep up the good work!
Well, A was good. Didn't enjoy B, wasn't to my tastes. Shame that Pound/Scootaloo moment never went anywhere though.
So pinky likes to watch, eh? Called it
I like how the ending of each version sort of ties into the others, a sort of "what could have been". Because of this, I think that there needs to be a fifth version where Pound bangs everyone from the first four at once.
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Is it just me or do I see you everywhere?
I LOST it. Bravo.
X 1,000,000
Told ya it would get featured.
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~Skeeter The Lurker
This was better than A lot that I see, it was raunchy and damn entertaining. Please do more.
3459315 You did read his name right?
“Yay, ass pillow!” Scootaloo cheered before falling over again.
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What do you expect from someone who has "the Lurker" in their name?
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He be lurkin.
That, and/or mugged by insane fans/stalkers/family
For some reason, the opening made me think of the first lines of Pride and Prejudice. This, in turn, made me imagine Jane Austen writing cartoon horse porn.
In any case, an all-too believable and familiar scenario for poor young Pound. Porn logic to the rescue!
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I half expect Pinkie to offer him a flagon come the morrow.
"Ugh, what is this?"
"It's mead, cutie-colt!"
"It tastes like honey and sadness."
"And now you know why the Vikings went raiding so often!"
Ok. First off, I laughed my lungs out like five times in this story. Excellent job there man.
Next I wanna say thatyou caught Pound's emotions and thoughts damn well. On some occassions I even facepalmed because of that.
Pinkie's shout when she reentered Sugarcube Corner reminded me of the title giving announcement of the movie "Good morning Vietnam" I couldn't do anything about it.
And for my last statement. Why should we choose between four possibilities? I don't know how any of them will turn out, so I'm going to read them all.
My friend. You are made of pure win.
Dragon
So uh, Pumpkin's horn appears to be missing in the cover art. Why is this the detail I'm focussing on? God if I know.
Anywhom, good work! Looking forward to more :3 Pinkie Pie, stop teasin' the poor boy and &*%^ him already!
3460284 No, it's actually there (that teensy bit of yellow in the middle of her mane). It's just difficult to see at story image resolution.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw.
So lovely.
And Scootaloo was so much win even if she was interrupting.
Dragon
3459315 You must be new here.
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ESPERRRRRRR
Good one too.
Salty revenge for Spoony.
And your aouthor's note!
Well. I shall reply.
Can't wait for the other chapters.
Dragon
Firstly, I would quite like to see a version with Scoots in it.
Secondly, that was possibly the greatest clop fiction I've ever read. It made me laugh so much, and had enough of a decent written story to keep me interested outside of the humour. Seriously, well done, I might have to look into some of your other fictions if they are of that calibre.
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What this guy said...
Literally the funniest thing I've seen all week.
Non-Sequitur for the win.
Well written, entertaining, belief-suspending, funny, and erotic.
Brilliant.
I even put this in my top five clopfics, after Xenophilia, Tipsy and Purely Scientific Interest (because double dragon dick), but before Field Notes on Alicorn Reproductive Behavior (Or, Where Little Alicorns Cum From).
Why...why do i like this
I seen that anime before it's kinda funny. No sub titles through. I understand Japanese
Oh Celestia that authors note got me in tears!!!
This is just... wow. I don't know if I should call this wincest, I don't know if I should be liking it (I'm pretty sure I should be...), and worst of all, I don't even. Really fuckin' good job here, I'd have to say.
>Apple Bloom has her degree in civil engineering...
>...and a distant touch of gear grease.
I dunno man, that sounds more like a mechanical engineer than a civil engineer; a CE would more likely smell like cat piss from working with blueprints all the time, instead of gear grease.
If AB had been drunk best foursome ever. anybody agree?
and a moustache for no reason
dear god i demand more
Hey, Your Antagonist, I have a question.
Would this story be considered canon of Serenade of Silver Belles (as in, both stories are in the same universe)? Or is it an AU/entirely separate Silverbelle story?
Guys , i found pinkie, i was always keeping an eye out for her
and is it strange that i get 'weird' feelings while reeding this
I think scootolo would have banged anypony at that moment
And this is how fluttershy would feel
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I hope for the same as well.
Wait, When one connects to one...... OMG DOES THIS MEAN YOUR SAYING MR. AND MRS. CAKE ARE BROTHER AND SISTER
Okay, I have to admit that so far this fic is scandalously awesome. Can't wait for the next two. I hope C is Pound and Scoots. And D has to be either Pinkie or Rarity it just has to be although I could see something mind blowing coming from way out of the left field.
WHEN WILLL THE NEXT PART COME OUT
I CANT WAIT ANYMORE
Paki? Wut?
I choose E) ALL OF THE ABOVE AT THE SAME TIME! AND THE NIGHT SHALL LAST FOREVER! ;)
Firstly, I must commend you on your most fantastic story, it was great. Side A was my favorite so far, in fact, I wish I could have seen more of it.
On that note, I know that I am likely not the first, but I would absolutely love to see a continuation of sequel to side A. This is not meant to be a demand, though, as an editor I know how demands can effect the author, so this is merely informative
The Author's Note... I don't even know how to react, I don't even know how that's related to this fic, and worst of all... I don't even.
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As you wish, mon ami.
3466367 "What? N—" Your Antagonist took a moment to mull over the question. He couldn't pass this opportunity up, afterall he'd never get a chance to mindfuck his audience so grandly again. "Yes. Yes it does. Mr. Cake was a player who had lain with every mare in Ponyville... except his sister."
3466087 Aye, it be part of the same universe, ya inquisitive scallywag. Thar be enough of a time differential and ambiguity between them two stories and the sequel I ain't writ' yet for 'em to share a correlation...Arrr!
3466940 It's a Japanese onomatopoeia for breaking ice.
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Ahh, gotcha.
Thanks for answering!
That'll add a new twist when I get around to rereading Serenade again.
Main protagonist is about Pound Cake.
Title is Having your Cake and eating her out too.
Only female Cakes we know of are Pound Cake's twin sister and mother.
I'M NOT SURE I LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING.
3468384 only you can decide where it goes.
Damn this is a good clop fic
Time to guess what's next. For C I'm thinking it's scootaloo cause she appear dunk last chapter and maybe some applebloom, doubtful. For D I'm thinking pinkie or rarity however it could also be cup but again I'm doubtful that it's cupcake.
Ah, another piece of evidence that I'm a fucked up person. Twincest is wincest, indeed.