The Traders Exchange is up and Fleetfoot wants to visit it out of pure nostalgia. But when none of her friends have the time to accompany her, she decides to invite somepony with whom she works very often together, but still doesn't know much about - Blaze. She expects a nice, calm day with a few good trades and a tasty hot dog. What Fleetfoot got was something completely different with an interesting result.
Note: The story happens at the same time as the episode in season 4, in which the Main 6 visit the Traders Exchange.
Chapters (1)
Sounds like the start of a cute story. I noticed a few grammar errors here and there, mainly consisting of misplaced commas or some sentences that could use some rephrasing, but nothing major to where I couldn't follow the story. And I can tell you've been improving bit by bit ever since you started, and revising an old story is a good way to get some practice.
Anyway, as for those pesky grammar things, I'd recommend sharing chapters to a friend/proofreader before they go up. That way, you can address some of those mistakes easily. Almost all writers have editors/proofreaders, and they can be excellent in terms of learning the craft as well.
Keep trying to do the best you can. I can tell you have a lot of potential as a writer, so I'll track this for now. Best wishes!
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(Wow, that story was up really quick...
Thanks for your criticism. And your nice words. I really appreciate them.
I tried to find an editor twice for my other story, Lost in Darkness, but the 'editors' who promised to check my story never bothered to take a look, so I left the search out this time. Maybe I'll have a bit more luck if I try it again now.
6732391 You're welcome! If you have any specific questions about the writing process, you're more than welcome to message me and I'll try to get back to you as soon as possible.
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Aww, thanks.
6732451 You're welcome! I wish you the best of luck on your writing endeavors.
Very interesting, I like it already. Has all the makeups to be a fantastic story.