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TheTimeSword


For someone named "TheTimeSword", I sure don't manage my time very well.

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While the mane six are enjoying a meteor shower, one meteor changes its course and lands in the Everfree. The group of friends rush after it to ensure the entire forest doesn't burn down, but what they find may be more than they bargained for. A furry companion with strange powers asks the ponies for help with finding his kind and defeating a dark evil that followed it.


* This story is part of my "Writing Goals" under Adventure.

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 7 )

Whoa, this is actually pretty interesting! Not a bad opener to a story.

“Cnthlk.” He said in his normal tongue.

The proper response, of course, was "gesundheit". :rainbowlaugh:

I look forward to this story

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More is coming soon! :raritywink: I'm glad someone is eager enough to ask for more, that makes me truly happy!

In the first paragraph everyone should be everypony.

I wonder if Fluttershy thinks of him as a child due to his small stature. It would explain the kiss. That could be awkward.

This occurred several times throughout Kai’s dream that night, causing him to whine and wimped in his sleep.

whimper

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