Out, Out, Brief Candle!

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Pinkie Pie lights a candle, and nothing of particular note happens.

Oh, except the world ending.

Thanks to AppleTank and billymorph for editing and pre-reading.

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Balewood

Balewood #1 · Dec 14th, 2015 · · ·

When I saw the title (before opening the page), I decide to make my comment

This is a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury

but then you put the poem at the end

Also loved this fun way to burn five minutes, Thanks for Writing!

book_burner

book_burner #2 · Dec 14th, 2015 · · ·

Nice horsewords! Love Pinkie's continual meta-awareness.

Adin

Adin #3 · Dec 14th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Somewhat interesting, but not really my thing.

Lord Of Dorkness

Lord Of Dorkness #4 · Dec 14th, 2015 · · ·

6731657

Fair enough. Still, thanks for reading.

R0tn3k

R0tn3k #5 · Dec 15th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I love stories where the author catches Pinkie just as I would imagine her in the situation she's put in.
And you wrote an awesome Pinkie in my opinion. And not just that, the setting and the idea an so on - just woah, I really like that story.
That said, here have a fave and thumb up and jeah, good work :D

IMNOTHERE889

IMNOTHERE889 #6 · Dec 15th, 2015 · · ·

That was very interesting. I liked it.
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wlam

wlam #7 · Dec 27th, 2015 · · ·

I don't know, this was a bit too artsy and self-referential for my taste.

Lord Of Dorkness

Lord Of Dorkness #8 · Dec 27th, 2015 · 1 · ·

6771667

Fair enough. This was an experiment, so I hardly expected it to be for everybody.

Still, thank you for giving it a try.

goaway

goaway #9 · Jan 18th, 2016 · · ·

I really enjoyed this. I love stories where your mind can just go off the hook for a bit and enjoy the experience washing over you.

Plus, you write Pinkie nicely. Tricky skill. that.

bobbananaville

bobbananaville #10 · Feb 19th, 2016 · · ·

Wow. Yeah, this is really metaphorical. Thought provoking. Stuff.
Maybe more wise than informative (more thought provoking than actually saying anything), but y'know. It's interesting.

PaulAsaran