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FlameMist


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Twilight needed to work on that counter spell. The fate of the whole world depended on it. So yea, she had to stay up all night if that's what it took. She went for a snack, but Pinkie Pie really didn't have that much of a variety, so she just sat down and stared at a blank paper. And then Sunset woke up. Maybe she could help Twilight with the spell. Or... since everybody else was sleeping...

Rated 'Teen' just in case... :derpyderp1:
What should have happened after the scene in Rainbow Rocks... :twilightsmile:
Yes, there is a picture in here. It actually inspired the story when I got a bit stumped on it. :raritystarry:

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Comments ( 17 )

yes..."friend"...

That was such a sweet story and what should've happened in the movie. Keep up the good work.

Yes Friend
Cause you know that's exactly what this story is all about with Sunset and Twilight
Being friends
no just no SunLight shipping all the way

I can see how this chapter and probably the rest of the story is going to be different from what I usually see how this part of the rainbow rocks scene goes in the fanfiction stories.
I really like this chapter, and I hope you produce even more great works !

6689798 Thanks, I will! :yay:

OMG this is adorable! They are great "friends".

Good job. Can't wait to read more.

Very cute; fluffy cute. I like the premise; expanding upon the night at Pinkie's house was something I'd been curious about ever since RR came out. I think each little moment was written pretty well, and it kept me interested enough to continue happily all the way through. There are a few little things that sort of break the mould, though; some errors in grammar and even general word placement obstruct the flow a few times throughout. Spelling errors are very few and far between, though. Have you considered having someone edit your writing for little mistakes and things that stick out? I think it's worth the extra bit of time it may take to have a final product that gets the audience immersed. Anyway, it's a cute little story, worthy of at least a thumbs up. :pinkiesmile: Thanks for writing, and I hope you keep working at it!

6731148 Yea, I'll definitely look it through, and if I can get an editor. Usually I just skim through it once for myself, and if anybody notices anything in the comments I'll consider getting somebody else to look it through for me. :derpyderp2: Thanks!

6731387 All you have to do to get an editor is ask. :twilightsmile: I'd be happy to help when I can, if you like.

6731387 i didn't mean to bother you, will there be a chapter or a sequel for this story, because i find this story very interesting, overall, you've done a good work!

7004996 I wasn't planning on it at first, but now that more than a couple people are expecting me to do it, I might just change my mind. If there is going to be anything like that, I know I'll start as soon as I can. Other than that, I'll keep you posted. :rainbowdetermined2:

6734239 Hey, I do need an editor. If you'd like you can do it. Just let me know.

This was adorably cute. It was really nice to read after reading something with drama which kind of stressed me out.

Oh Celestia! I love it!

The fact you need tell self repeatedly you only friend Sunset should say something.

"We really are luckier here." 

We really are lucky you're here

This was so cute & hilarious to read. :)

"We really are luckier here." Sunset smiled, opened Pinkie's fridge, revealing a bright light that Twilight's eyes weren't used to.

“... are lucky you’re here.” Sunset smiled,

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