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BlackWater


I love ponies, bronies, and matrimonies! I'm an author, artist, and plushie-maker. I create stuff and I try to make it awesome. Relax. You're in good company. ❤ ~Since 2012~

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Starlight took a chance and decided to give friendship a try once more. With nowhere else to go, she stays with Twilight. Being such a powerful magic user, Twilight doesn't feel like letting her go would be a good idea. But how much has Starlight really reformed? She spent much time following the purple pony princess. Perhaps she can use her understanding of the mare towards another end.

Art by BlackWater (me)

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 60 )

You just going to end it here where it just getting good?!

Fluffy.

A little too fluffy for my tastes, but that's not necessarily a bad thing.

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I could write more if anyone wants me to. :raritywink:

6682009 How about one where Spike saw StarTwi in bed and pretty much told his friends leading to different sides of the story?

I'm just staring at your title card asking myself what is with this fandom and ridiculously high production quality.

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That's an interesting idea. I might work in something like that. :ajsmug:

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In my personal experience, the brony community is very conductive towards an open and creative atmosphere. The show as well as other bronies are very inspiring. :twilightsmile: Also, brohoof. :rainbowdetermined2:

Ohh please keep this story going!
I think it would be so interesting to see where it goes from here!! :pinkiehappy:

Words cannot express how much I have been waiting for this pair to get a fic.

Waited all through season 5 for this pair to pick up. Totally worth it.

6682472 I wandered into this story not expecting much. "The episode just aired a couple days ago" I told myself. "Surely nobody has already written a real quality story" I thought. Then I read this. Thank you for proving me wrong, I didn't even find a single typo or instance of poor grammar and the font, large first letter at the beginning, and Title card (that's what you call the image at the top of the page, right?) made it feel almost like I was reading a chapter in an actual book. The pacing was a bit different than I'm generally used to but the way you used Starlight's stalking of Twilight and had her in Twilight's home for a week beforehand really made it more believable. I also really liked your take on Starlight's mentality in that she's still afraid of losing friends and do hope you write more. :twilightsmile:

I still love SunLight, but this..... this is adorable. Love it!

I didn't think I shipped these two, then the season finale aired and I was proven wrong.

Excellent story. If you write more, I'll certainly be happy to read it.

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You'll get to find out. (Taken off Complete status.) :raritywink:

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Glad you enjoyed. Although it's only 3k words so far, I blew my whole weekend to do it because I like to put a ton of effort into my stories. I do occasionaly make a spelling error. Twilight's name in particular. For some reason the G and H make me dyslexic. Anyways, Starlight's stalking truly is intense. I mean, she appeared throught the season derpy-style. It makes her rather fun to write. :pinkiehappy:

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Sunlight is my favorite ship too! How'd you know? :rainbowkiss:

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I didn't know either. Honestly, I didn't know if I'd ever care much for her. I kind of liked her at first but not enough to fan out like I do with other characters. Then the finale happened and I'm shipping supplies and ammunition to the Glimlight Navy. :twilightblush:

Nice, different from what I thought that would happen, but I would be glad to read more.

Hhhhmmm I like it, but then again I hope, that Starlight really isn´t goint to force Twilight to much, but then again, this could be a good chance for her to notice that she can´t force Twilight into it, and if she realy likes her....
I think you know what I mean, so I just let you do your thing.

“Get?” Bon Bon cracked a brow. “I didn't win her in a lottery, Starlight.

I think they only always understand it wrong.

nice chapter

Is this "city" supposed to a place, or a reference to a place from another show or video game? If so, then i have no idea what the place is.

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Generally speaking, I don't write crossovers or make such references in non-crossover stories. So it is not a reference anyone is expected to get. What it is will be revealed shortly. :pinkiesmile:

“I speak to you, Twilight Sparkle and Starlight Shimmer.”

Since when are Starlight and Sunset sisters?

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Hey now. Cut me some slack. GL and SH are right next to each other on the keyboard. :trollestia:

Color me intrigued! What is this great danger that our heroes will soon face?

Comment posted by Mr Swanky Hat deleted May 16th, 2016

Heh , that's what you get for dating an instable pony with , using anime terms , stalker and mayadere tendencies (plus I am sure she would go full on yandere , in the worst case scenario) :pinkiecrazy:

I get the distinct feeling Starlight Glimmer has some latent psychological issues on display here. And if I'm to be honest, Twilight too. It kind of sours the cuteness.

Oh my, I think I hit the nail on the head with that thought. Funny how I've forgotten the specific name for what Starlight is doing, though...

This is getting weird and convoluted. Chrysalis is not someone I expected to be around, let alone tolerated.

I'm also still having trouble buying that Starlight Glimmer is actually more magically powerful than the Princess of Magic. More importantly, she's... kind of unlikable. Not a story-killer, but still off-putting. I want to believe Twilight wouldn't get played so hard so consistently (even if that would have caused them to break up months ago).

7225844 there's a problem with Chapter 7. It seems you just uploaded Chapter 6 again.
I suggest making a blog about when its fixed

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Somehow chapter 6 got nuked with chapter 7. Not sure how or why that happened but I've fixed it. Both chapters 6 and 7 are the proper chapters now. :pinkiesmile:

I'm hooked! Can't wait for more!

Like we all know Lyra and Bon-Bon are in love with each other.

Celestia must be extremely pissed off right about now that her adopted son is abducted.

Making deals with criminals means giving up for what you stand for.

I'M THE GUY WHO'S GONNA KICK HIS ASS!!!!!!!!

How Chrysalis got there is a shocker.

It's not like those two will start making out during the teleporter and in front of their friends when they arrived.

So, will there be more?

Oh, by the way, are they doing naughty things already?:pinkiehappy: I mean, I don't remember anything of the sort from the time I read the first two chapters, and last few chapters clearly suggest something along the lines.

Checked out blog. Nyay? I mean,I'm glad you're working on it, I'm not that's coming to an end. I'm torn :c

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Yes there will be a few more chapters. They do have an intimate relationship, though I do not go into too many details since this is rated Teen. I'm really happy you've been enjoying it. It's been really fun to write. I do feel a little bad every time I end a story because - for me - none of my stories really have endings. The life of characters goes on past the chapters that I write. :heart:

But I've been writing fimfiction for about 4.5 years now and don't plan on ever stopping so it may have a continuation someday. When I'm done with this story, I'll be working on the sequel to Hive Alive (the first chapter almost has a complete draft now). :twilightblush:

Was she really going to ogle at the perfectly plush purple pony posterior of an alicorn princess?

Why not?

“You like trees,” she commented. It was easy remembering what she had gathered on this mare. “And books. You do know what books are made of, right?”

Heh

"You're a star and I don't mean that just for the cutie mark stuck on both of those enticing flanks.”

Starlight really knows how to sweet-talk :twilightsmile:

"You're like a shining star in a dark night sky.”

Again: Starlight knows just what to say

“Well, if you've really read my secret diary,” Twilight finally returned the sultry look, “I think we'll be too wrapped up with the bedroom-related activities to bother.”

Okay: Please

“Don't act innocent, dear,”

Ohh, how the 'dear' is said really helps that scene, good job.

“Just keep putting it off,” Starlight taunted. “I won't wait forever. I'll take you in your sleep if I have to.”

“That's rape!” Twilight shuddered.

Starlight rolled her eyes. “Do you want to be intimate with me someday?”

“Yes,” Twilight answered almost in a whisper.

“Consent.”

“Hey!”

Starlight's smugness and overall attitude is really good in my opinion.

“What now?” Applebloom frowned.

that responce

“Are you going to keep calling me that?”

“Twily Twily Twily~”

Again, I love Glimmer's personality

It's like TwiStar always make out in front their friends and/or family as a running gag.

Starlight can teleport across space...
...
Well, that escalated quickly:rainbowderp:

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Of course she can teleport across space.

It's nothing compared to turning back time a number of years, maintaining the spell, fighting an alicorn princess (ending in victory) and levitating herself all at the same time.

Not to mention Starswirl and Twi never managed to go back very far in time and never managed to change the timeline, only creating time loops, whereas Star just came along took a look at the spell and went back years and created many alternate timelines.

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Indeed. And it begs the question what she can already do but chooses not to. She's a former villain that was never defeated but rather chose to change for her own sake. Based on what she's done before, I go off the assumption that she is familiar enough with Starswirl's magic that she can easily figure it out and modify it. :raritystarry:

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Indeed, I think any spell of Starswirl's would be easy for her to modify.

And I wonder, just how powerful is Starlight Glimmer? What other hidden facets does she have? Is she powerful enough to actually beat the other alicorns?

And the good thing is that she never wanted the destruction of Equestria cause if that was her goal, she'd have won several times over.

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