Starlight Glimmer asks Twilight on a date, and well, it happens! Obviously, they go to a fancy library with dinner served to them. But..it turns out Rainbow Dash is somehow their waitress.
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My name is MlpLover65 from YouTube. And I'm here to right a couple of fanfics. I might even make some into audio dramas. So, be on the look out my little gifts! Bye everyone, and have a good day:) Bia
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This is VERY short, has errors, but seeing some GlimLight fills me with determination and hapiness, so... faving
Still, I do recommend you to find a editor.
Short and sweet.
By the way one word... the last word and title are "awkward" not "akward". Great story by the way. There's so much in these short chapters. I like it,
Very Short but it's ok it's decent.
6842469 Thanks!
6842254 Thanks so much!
Awwwwww
Quite short and that final chapter was rushed, extremely rushed. It is an overall good story but I would have at least liked to see some buildup to that kiss at the end.
I’m sorry but this whole story felt rushed and I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t disappointed. No offense or anything.
You have an interesting idea for a story here, but it feels very rushed, you left many important parts out, like how did Twi react to the invitation, how did RD react to knowing it, etc. It is important to show moments like that, not just tell about the aftermath.
This is too plane for my taste