First Date

by MlpLover65IsHere

LOVE

After the date, Twilight and Starlight Glimmer raced home.

Starlight invited Twilight to sit in her room so they could practice magic together.

"That date didn't go as planned, did it?" Twilight asked.

"Not really.." Starlight sadly admitted. "But.......do you love me, Twilight?"

Twilight grasped onto Starlight's shoulders and pulled her in for a kiss. The two kissed. For once, Starlight finally felt true love.

Author's Note:

Yes, I know this is short. But a short finale chapter is my specialty.

Comments

[Spider8ite]

This is VERY short, has errors, but seeing some GlimLight fills me with determination and hapiness, so... faving Still, I do recommend you to find a editor.

[Diamond Sparkle]

Short and sweet.

[Rye Snoot]

Very Short but it's ok it's decent.

[MlpLover65IsHere]

6842469 Thanks!

[MlpLover65IsHere]

6842254 Thanks so much!

[Nightmare mare]

Awwwwww

[StormLuna]

Quite short and that final chapter was rushed, extremely rushed. It is an overall good story but I would have at least liked to see some buildup to that kiss at the end.

[Starlight Glimmer1]

I’m sorry but this whole story felt rushed and I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t disappointed. No offense or anything.

[Anshlun]

You have an interesting idea for a story here, but it feels very rushed, you left many important parts out, like how did Twi react to the invitation, how did RD react to knowing it, etc. It is important to show moments like that, not just tell about the aftermath.

[Kazkhoo]

This is too plane for my taste