Call me logisticbumm. I write and draw in my spare time. Thanks for stoping by.
unable to sleep at one of Twilight's weekly slumber parties, Spike ventures out into the night air in hopes to clear his mind and do some thinking. When he's joined by Rarity, the two get a chance to talk about what's on their minds.
Rated T for minor suggestive nature of a comment or two, nothing super indepth.
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Wow this is lovely. Well made, few errors, nice Characterization. I like this
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Thanks for the praise! I tried my hardest to make sure that there were no errors if I could avoid it. I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
Are they ponies or humans. You keep mixing up your words. "She ran a finger through her mane" it makes no sense. She can either run a hoof through her mane or a finger through her hair not both.
Rarity put a hand to her lips and giggled before wiping the tears from her eyes. "Did I break you darling? It should say hoof. It can get very confusing when you say things like this and it takes away from the story when you picture pony Rarity with 2 arms instead of hooves
Besides what I pointed out it was still a good story
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to answer all of your comments in one go, they're anthropomorphic, much like the work you might see done by Pia-Sama
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Pia-sama is an inspiration in her art work with Rarity and Spike. This is around the third time I have read this and I still enjoy it.