Twilight Sparkle accidentally leaves her class with the wrong backpack. Normally, this wouldn't be a problem, except that the backpack belongs to the one girl she's had the biggest crush on since moving to Canterlot High.
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Greatest. Swear. Ever.
Loved it.
When did Sci-Twi become Helga Pataki minus the bullying?
Awww, this is sweet.
This is where I started laughing and then didn't stop
That was delightful. Something about your writing on this account is really nice. Very stream-of-consciousness-y. I see it's marked unfinished. That a mistake, or will this be Blue Harvest's first multi-chapter story?
Also, this girl needs to get laid. Because dayum.
Why not? It's awesome,
Well, that prose was purple as all Hell, but for a work like this that's just what the Physicist theorized!
... Okay, yeah, that joke sucked. Whatever,
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Oh god, please let this be multichaptered. I just saw another Sunlight story by blue harvest, and I dorked out like Twi in Sunset's presence. Took me about three paragraphs to know this would be another winner. The way Twi's internal voice is written, the way those two dorks dance around each other...
Please. Multichapter or sequel, please get them together and happy. Give poor SciTwi her wish of holding Sunset in romantic context.
Please sir, may we have some more?
i love this it needs more chapters more MORE MORE!!!!!!!!
It lives.
I just read both this and "Pigeon Toes" and they're leaving me twitching delightfully with adorableness and needing more of your SunLight, Sunset Sparkles, whatever you want to call it.
I mean, holy crap. So good.
I didn't like this one as much as Pigeon Toes. Twilight's anxiousness seemed really over-the-top, and the overuse of ellipses just made it annoying to read. You've still got some very nice prose, but nothing as beautiful as last time.
wat
Pythagoras on the first date?!! Wow, very kinky Twilight...
Nice story, keep the awesome work ;)
I really like how you just went with it.
I'm gonna say you're in like Flynn, Twi.
This needs more chapters
!! Or a sequel 
... and now I know why the prose was purple,
Okay, I just woke up, so someone needs to explain to me what just happened.Edit: Okay, never mind. I missed the link in the story.
Edit 2: (I still would like more Sunlight from you, if possible. How impolite is it to acknowledge crying for a sequel is annoying just after you did it?)
This was a great trip through a love addled mind of nerdy love.
The mathematical/literary descriptors, swears was brilliant and so well done.
I love this and the other story
I was never this... Engaged with a short story, so I think this chapter is the best, the absolute best chapter of all that I've read here at FIMFiction or, for that matter, all around the web.
From the beggining it was like... weird because noone starts with this kind of poetry-like narration. Beautifully written, thought and everything else that I can think of, because it was just the thing that I needed today, so it made the rest of the day for me.
It was so really excellent
Tagging this as "human" isn't really necessary as this is set in the EQGverse. Not really a fan of your writing style, but hey, to each their own. Have a good one!
keep going this story is amazing
You must be a master poet. The use of such imagery was just beautiful.
I don't get the ending. Could someone explain it?
This was adorable!
Need MOAR!! This story still has so much more places to go!
I don't know why but this left me dying
You should've had a warning notice. The cuteness in this chapter was amazing. Loved it.
6673848 Twilight accidentally takes home Sunset's phone instead of her own. She gives in to curiosity and unlocks it. The background wallpaper on the phone is a picture of someone with sexy legs, Photoshopped to have Twilight's lavender skin colour.
Well, Twi, you got the girl.
And she's a huge pervert. Good... job?
What is it about this writing style that brings the shadow of a thousand tears to my lids? :') I love this story (or chapter). So sweet and innocent. Beautiful in concept and execution. Thank you for writing.
6671417 I couldn't have described it better.
This. /)_< Funny, though.
hehe, this was pretty funny. Also man, you are really good at writing lovesick twilight
Still wondering if the phone swap was intentional, or not.
Probably not.
MOARRR!!!! I NEED MORE OF THIS SUNLIGHT FLUFF!!! I need an IV with 4, no, 6 units of SunLight fluff, STAT!!!
Holly S&%$ Twilight you hold these emotions in any longer you'll explode with the force of Russia and America's nuclear arsenal!
6694417 But she said something about
.What does that mean. And what does
mean?
6827752 1: Embarrassment
2: Misspelling of Asimov, probably an attempt at a nerd swear
Sequel!!! Loved the story.
There's way too much to quote!! So funny yet also very deep and poetic. Loved it!
This was a brilliant little story! ^-^ It was a little hard to read with the mix of first and second person (Gave me a small headache), but my mind finally decided to say 'I'm okay with this' ^-^ Great stuff! I give this a seven and three-quarters muffins out of ten ^-^
~SoDF
I am loving the internal monologue. So Twilight!
I kept it together until that part.
And that.
And aaaaaaaaaah that ending!
6766438 Sir, we only have units of ten!