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Thanks a lot, Twily!

That dialogue was something that I had lined out but I just started to think of the exact words when I actually got to that part of the charapter, so hearing someone loving it is really nice

I am planning on writing the second chapter fairly soon, but school is getting in the way of thing because I have to give a ton of exams between the next week and the following, and my dad's furious about that, so I'll try to drop it next saturday or so (Warning: My saturday is Argentina's saturday, so hope to read it by Sunday-Monday of the upcoming week.)

I was going to write some more, but it's already a lot, so better not.

Tell me if anything feels odd about any scene, please, and 'til weekend!

Congrats on your first story! I personally loved the dialogue between RaRa and AJ. I ship it! Are playing to update the story in the near future?

Hey, Descendant, how's it going?

I'm not sure I have any question now besides "Any advice?", but that must be because I'm tired out of my skull right now, so I'll be sure to pm you later with anything.

Also, I'm not an english speaker, so any "Your sentence doesn't make any sense" would be really apreciated (just be kind with it, yeah?)

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