Rainbow Dash comes home to her marefriend Applejack. After a busy day of farmwork, Applejack has some fruit that she needs to count. Rainbow just wants to sniff her mane.
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That was oddly the most beautiful thing I've read all day. Thank you so very much for that.
That was wonderful. And oh so silly. But wonderful. Heehee.
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Should have known I'd meet you here.
Gotta love some first pony Dashie.
Mmm. This was nice.
Good lord, that was adorable.
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Aw! So special
Thankee, s ugarcube.
Holy balls that was good!
~Skeeter The Lurker
mmmm, I like it x) Always enjoy these perspective stories like this. It's just so cute, and how Rainbow lets her defenses down completely. c:
Adorable!!!
I must applaud the rather uncommon perspective you take in this fic. phrasing it like a story addressed to Applejack was a perspective I don't see enough.
Now, for nitpicks...
I thought Rainbow's overreaction was a bit much of an overreaction, though I can see where it came from. Rainbow is certainly prone to blowing things out of proportion, but this seemed just a touch paranoid, even for her.
Okay, nitpicking is over. Even with that being said, I have to say I like a Rainbow who's deathly afraid of losing Applejack. And a glimpse into Rainbow's mind is always nice.
I love your writing style for AppleDash, really gets one to think. Wonderful as usual!
P.S. That last sentence, ha!
That was adorable! This has to be one of my most favorite appledash's in a while.I look forward to your future work, just brilliant!
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I would disagree. Her reaction is entirely warranted. I'm much the same way: insecure to the point of having to be reminded that people really so like me and are not just putting on a show to avoid hurting my feelings. Given just how insecure Rainbow is (seen especially in The Sonic Rainboom, but also scattered throughout the show as a whole; she cares an awful lot about what other ponies think of her), it's not much of a stretch to see her in such a nervous position when told the equivalent of "we need to talk" alongside the lack of communication from Applejack.
Loved the fic. Short, but absolutely adorable.
This made me feel less bitter and alone.
An interesting story from the perspective of rd. It was different from other spirits but it was still good. well done :ajsumg:
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Perhaps I should rephrase. I thought it seemed to lay it on a bit thick. Her reaction was totally in character, but the delivery seemed a bit much, at least for me. I still like the fic, though; that moment just seemed... I don't know, to lay on it a little thick, but that could just be me.
Absolutely loved it! The way you write Dash and her perspective. Damn, I could read something written like this all day, even if it was just describing flowers. Oh, and I think I got diabetes from this story.
Liked what you did with the perspective. And...
"Oh hey, a wall."
This might just be the only exception to my rule.
Well played, writer person.
She does tend to wear that word out... Nice story, I thought it would be funny if AJ kicked her or something, but I suppose breaking Dash's cool persona is funnier. That and well she did fly into a wall...
That was "awesome", heheheh.
That was super cute and funny! Awesome ending by the way!!!
These stories are beautiful. You have an amazing gift. Thank you for sharing it with us. I am all warm and fuzzy inside right now... and that rocks... so thank you. I dearly hope that you keeps these going. Your awesome. That is all.
*Grins and slow claps* Very nice, I' had a partner or two lik that and knowing you're loved goes a long way to easing that ache.
This might just be the best AppleDash I have ever read, in that it made me glad these two ponies were dating. Normally, I'm somewhat ambivalent in that regard.
This was adorable. Your use of perspective here was unconventional but effective. AJ and RD were both very believable, and your word usage was wonderfully descriptive.
Keep up the good work!
This was stupidly adorable~
Goofy rainbow horse and silly apple horse are best horses
Another gem!
hehe this was a great one too ^^
it was adorable, cute, romantic and still just felt so true.
and the end made me chuckle.
thank you for this great piece