• Member Since 4th Jun, 2012
  • offline last seen Sep 23rd, 2014

cocksucker69


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Comments ( 18 )

Seems rushed, and has quite a few grammatical errors.

BUWHAHAHA, PIC IS SOOOO FUNNY! LOLOLOL

Be careful when commenting on this guy's stories. He's a master in the art of trolling.

*whips out handgun and shoots self*

What... The fuck?

What is it that bad????????

697802
No just....few gram errors thats all

http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m50gelf3kB1qj3ir1.gif
I agree with TallyHo (even though i pissed myself with laughter)

the picture really say it all

697802 I'll be honest, it was very bad when it comes to spelling, grammer, all the editing. I mean it was really random, and why the fuck am I even commonting? I hate Troll fics, but yes, you have a lot of work you need to get down re-doing this story. Best part was the Spike/Twilight and Rainbow Dash sex though. :derpytongue2:

738978 I'll get my fag Friends to redo it for me!!!!!!!!!!!!

745355 Sorry bro, but I'm just telling it like it is...or needs to be said. Work on it a bit and then have the rest of us re-read it if you will.

Do you want me to make another chapter????

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What...the...Fuck?
But i have to admit that was a good laugh!
You should make another chapter good sir.
:rainbowlaugh:

Yes, I do believe this covered all the bases.

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