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Handsome


Ah! Did you say... handsome?

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Well then. It's time for Equestria to hear Jaime ROOOOOOOOOOOOOAR!

The frist thing that I think of is Aslan from Narnia. :raritycry::raritydespair:

6656710 from the trideer alone that is, not the story.

Finally something not overthetop

Looks interesting. I'll fave and like for now.

6656710 Really? My first thought was Shiki from One Piece. Aslan was my second.

SISTERFUCKER! KINGSLAYER! OATHBREAKER!

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I have a problem with NONE of those titles...:trollestia:. 'Specially if Cersei's involved...

Can't wait for the next chapter!

"And who are you?", The proud thug said, "That I should bow so low..."

"I'm a Displaced, you son of a bitch, and I'm the best that's ever been."

6668799 "Devil went Down to Georgia" eh?

I can't wait for a new chapter.

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I hunger for new chapters more than Tyrion for the secret of where the whores go.

A popular man such as him will earn many a attention, desired or not to come.

Though if he does adventure, he might get embroidered in conflicts of nobility as stated above. For all we know it could be far before Luna's original 'fall from grace', things could be vastly different for all we know! *shivers in excitement.*

6717237 Indeed, things could get very exciting.:trixieshiftleft:

Hope to see more of this soon!^_^

We award thou for another fine chapter, Also the young Velvet being a spry if young maiden may very likely become enamored by her knight in golden armor. A Proud if not valiant Lion in her eyes? Also there would be quite a joy if there were cultural misunderstandings, though as for his new friend we think she might come from a influential house or store if she were robbed and NOT raped. Though we wonder how he may feel of a matriarchal society, since he came from a male dominated one.

Velvet Jewel wouldn't happen to be Twilights future mother would she?

6747890 Nah, this is set in a significant amount of time way before Twilight and her parents. But no worries, I'm hoping to set the timeframe in which this is all happening soon enough.

6747787 Who knows?:ajsmug: Only time shall tell.

6747903 We might grin if he started gaining fame as the 'Golden Lion' Knight, since he is not tied down to a noble or such he may be referred to as a free knight? We forget the proper name for it but the more he does we do know he shalt gain the turning of heads besides his beauty.

6748417 Heh, I've got some aliases for him to be known as. And yeah, the more deeds he does the more his name will spread, he can't just be known for his beauty eh?

6748472 his destination will result in a sea port town or city, though we had imagined it being a trade hub for other species. We might even gain sights of, let alone how active things may be there.

This is an impressively well written story, and the quality of reflects well on you and any editors/beta readers you may use the services of. Now, on to what I think of the story it's self, a Jaime Lannister Displaced has a lot of potential, especially if you have him follow the Old Gods, and considering the whole "suddenly ageless" nature of Displaced, I suspect he will become the oldest living member of nobility besides Celestia and Luna. Because eventually, he will have enough spare coin to finance a business or two, then fast forward a century or two, and his businesses might just be the leaders in quality to the point that any one in the relevant work that doesn't know them has been living under a rock, or thinks they have a better way. Besides, money makes the world work.

Very nice story so far, pretty good battle scenes.
Nice work. :twilightsmile:

The girl smiled back up at Jaime and replied, “My name is Velvet, Velvet Jewel.”

Name Velvet and has a purple color scheme... did he just save Twilight great-great-great-great... (some time later)... great-great-grandmother?
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6817095 Could be, could not be

when's the next chapter coming out :derpyderp2::pinkiesmile:

JFK

is this dead?

7146071 No, I'm just writing and/or planning chapters in advance.

Jaime swung his sword up in retaliation and it caught the man in his balls.

DAAAMMMMMMMMMMMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The man with the cut open groin had bled to death.

Oooh I pity that guy uhgg nobody should have to die like that

6748417 well there's a few variations

The Hedge knight who donated his services to the peoplease freely (he becomes the hero of the people but can't maintain his armor and weapons)

The Knight Errant who was a wandering do gooder either in search of a lord or is trying to find some noble deeds to do (such as the stereotypical knight things, save a princess, hunt evildoers, blah blah blah)

Then there's the knights who either have proclaimed themselves knights and are just richer bandits or are people from a declining noble house trying to bring back glory and gold to their house.

And them there's the men who serve the various orders, the Knights Hospitallier for example.

Then there is the possibility of a Knight who saw more gold being on the other side of the law and that is a Rogue knight, someone who abandoned the morality that they had while being a knight.

Bruh.... This is Amazing!!! PLEASE tell me you're going to update this!?

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something tells me that yes

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