Equestria has abandoned the ways of old and are now quickly forwarding their ventures. This is a new age of smoke and ash as companies quickly push technology forward. The new businesses have allowed large money grabbers to seize power in the nobility, threatening Celestia and Luna's rule. A war with the griffins is approaching as well as something lurking in the shadows of the east
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