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IT LIVES ALL HAIL SoMBER. Also first.
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It does. Sorry it took so long.
Welcome back. Glad i set this story on 'tracking'.
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Next chapter soon? Like in an hour?
Exciting!
I am unclear on how the rock defeated the golem and why the book decided to be unhelpful.
I was ecstatic when this popped up! I can't express enough how much I look forward to reading your story! It was thanks to you and Kkat's story that I found the mlp fanbase and realized it wasn't all pink, girly, and rainbows. To me your writing feels so alive and I ALWAYS feel like I'm right there surviving the dangers with them. Please keep doing what your doing and by all means please enjoy doing it!
Yeah, she's definitely not over the trauma of the "come-to-life" megaspell, is she?
"and not getting around by all the twisting"
"and not getting turned around by all the twisting"?
"you build a shine on top of a perfectly"
"you build a shrine on top of a perfectly"?
"with little ammunition pile still perched"
"with a little ammunition pile still perched"?
"falling in a heap besides her. “It’s got"
"falling in a heap beside her. “It’s got"?
"will show you what I happened"
"will show you what happened"?
"shuffle forward a touch it."
"shuffle forward and touch it."?
"she said as dodged the little"
"she said as she dodged the little"?
"her flying into the hair, landing"
"her flying into the air, landing"?
"How you I defeat it?"
"How do I defeat it?"?
"the legion’s actually some work for once"
"the legion’s actually doing some work for once"?
"“How does he even broadcast all the way out here, in the middle of nowhere? Even DJ Pon3 had needed the broadcast towers of the MASEBS. So how did Doctor Z reach out in the middle of the Badlands with barely a scratch to his voice? “Is it the same person?”"
Missing quotation mark somewhere in there?
"machines. That right! The"
"machines. That's right! The"?
"prowling the Badlands as she seeks with her mercenary"
"prowling the Badlands with her mercenary"?
"odd. Black gunk of corrupted spirits. She"
Was there meant to be more to that sentence?
"soon as we finished translating and now she just standing there"
"soon as we finished transmitting and now she's just standing there"?
"network, it they’re compatible"
"network, if they’re compatible"?
"Hope it's okay."
Oh, aye, no worries, another good one, Somber, I thought! :D
Nice to have a chapter from you again. :)
Sleep well!
Yaaaaay!
Ta da!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like it. MORE PLEASE!!!
Yay, new chapter^^ Don't worry, I don't mind waiting for such story (as long as there aren't any clifhangers or they aren't too... big, you know?), especially when the chapters are as good as this one^^
Wow, I forgot how clever Charity is I didn't catch on that this was what happened when Majina told that story, but she immediately saw through it.
You know, I've played Bioshock Remastered again recently, so now I had a random thought "how would Charity and Andrew Ryan get along?"
One would think that Menace would be more apt name for Blackjack, I would imagine that's what her enemies would call her.
Anybody else feels like punching something everytime zebras praise that bastard and claim he had defeated her, or that he defeated the Easter of Souls?
So it's sorta like House from New Vegas, only with a bit of shamanistic magic thrown into it?
Awesome chapter, as always^^
Your Great Work is always Worth the wait, somber.
I Think Scotch Tape wasn't so bad as shamah. And her nickname and faked Background is the most dumbest Thing i ever Heart. Traveller suits her very well.
Well, this was a nuts chapter. Totally worth the wait! Weird unknown controller of golem, Rocky the OP rock spirit, finally some more Doctor Z. *slams hoof on desk* This is the content I'm here for!
Barely ever comment, been reading your stories since you were on gdocs with horizons, but I'm glad your back. Keep on keeping on!
WOO MORE. feeding my addiction!
Not again! Poor Scotch, what a difficult scenario to be traumatized by... twice!
Nice
Congratulations on yet another great chapter.
Wew, what a chapter to come back to! Keep it up Somber!
So glad to see some more of this fantastic story!
It's definitely cool to see Scotch expanding her abilities, but I'm always nervous for her as well
The dialogue between the characters had me laughing, and the battle with the golem was a close call that I enjoyed. Now, what the hell is going on with the tube-zebra!? Creepy as shit, and definitely a whole other aspect of the journey is about to unfold.
Thanks for your work Somber, you're the best
As always I find great enjoyment in Scotch's exploration of her turning her star-touched curse into shaman proficiency (and the way the shamany stuff reacts to her), the nuances of the Zebra's history and cultures modern and pre-war, and how Scotch is getting asked the hard questions about who she is as a person!
I did have to re-read the part where the radio zebras were talking on the radio a few times though because I was getting confused about who was talking and who was hearing what from whom.
'with a little ammunition pile' ?
'Then the smoking pile of rock' ?
' actually done some work' ?
' wanna-be' ? 'wannabe' ?
I thought it was the Tremendous Twelve
Looking ever so forward to the next chapter!
Wheeeew, another update and quite the doozy this one was, damn good show bud, damn good show.
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I think it's complicated.
There how I see it.
There is Magnificent Twelve - real team of zebra heroes.
There is Tremendous Twelve - TV show based on them.
And presumably there is this new Terrific Twelve.
Or in zebra language that adjectives is Interchangeable.
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Or I have shitty memory.
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Although I may find keeping things such as this in line in my head a difficult task, I generally get more enjoyment through attributing alleged incongruities like these to how even in real life there are plenty of fractured memories of history and of the state of things in the present. That is what I enjoy, rather than getting all huffy about the author's vision not being 100% flawless throughout time and editors finding everything that needs fixing.
Truth be honest, at least in the case of FoEq stories, I keep imaging FIMfiction as another editing staging ground whence books I can hold are eventually published.
Am I getting ahead of myself? Yes. Yes I am. And that's ok. ..I think.. Or hope...
Awesome chapter, also surprised Scotch passed out from seeing that equine when she took a bath with a bunch of spirits.
Yay its done
Loved the chapter, its very different from Project horizons which is neat, And im very happy to see it still going.
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she has robot face phobia
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Oh yeah I totally forgot.
Just had a thought about the Spirit of Justice and the amount of 'evil' that it showed was in Scotch Tape.
Since we know that killing another being yields this Dark ickor 'spirit juice'. And the more life you take, the greater amount of this ickor sticks to one's 'soul?' We don't really know how much 1 kill can amount to. I can recall only 2 kills for the entirety of Scotch Tapes life. (1 from when Blackjack first let slip that P21 is ST's father, and the other from the Carnico office)
But What if Scotch is inadvertently taking innocent life, and accumating this Dark Ickor without even being aware of it? After all, a copper implant is a form of birth control. (I know this is a stretch)
I always assumed the implant kills sperm before it can fertilize the egg. But what if theres times the egg is fertilized, but still dies because of the implant? (I don't recall much detail on how exactly the implant works.)
We know that Ponies go into heat in Somber's version of the world. Tho it doesn't say how often. I'm going to assume it happens as often as Google says it does. And if Scotch has gone on the prowl the last couple years (assuming she started her first heat during the 3 month time skip in PH) that's could be quite a few potential lives she's snuffed out without being aware of it.
EDIT: This could tie into ST's whole "I don't really know who I am" thing... She thinks she's good, but doesn't realize she's being evil by having that Implant still in her. And if that turns out to be true for the cause of so much Black Icor; then the Carnelians strict beliefs about "Life is precious" holds more water than originally thought.
Great work as always Somber!
I have a feeling I know who's golem that is.
The heck? Does my "Tracking" bookshelf specifically meant for notifying me about updates not actually give me notifications? I thought this story abruptly died, and instead I randomly check and find I've missed two new chapters.
Hm.
It has come to my understanding that you have been working on another FE story that has gone under my radar. It will be a pleasure to read this commander. We will be watching.
Eeeeeee yes this made my day eeeeeee time to forget life and read this chapter all day UwU
Amazing
Was this a monster Hunter reference to the Kirin?
I just loved the bit with Scotch listening in on the two zebras after their little transmission! Great chapter as usual Somber!
Take your time Somber. We don't mind how long it takes. The quality of your work more than makes up for it. I've been hear since chapter 20 of Horizons and I'll be hear till you stop writing. You do you and take the time to look after yourself alright? Have a good one my dude.
P.S per all of my previous comments on this fic, I must ask, when are Scotch and Pythia gonna mash tacos? Still waiting on it
WOOOH! Thanks for another great chapter! I always enjoy reading these from ya! Take as much time as necessary, Som! It's all good here!
1000th comment.
keep going as long as it takes you, this fic is as good as pretty unique in the FoE niche!
Hoooooooboy. Now there's a long-ago, deep-seated phobia making a return like a 2x4 to the back of the head...
This was great! I eagerly await the next bit. I'm digging the deal made with Rocky. Wonder how that will turn out.
Seems more and more that Caesar's Shaman was probably Pythia's past life dad.
This sounds like a perfectly sensible protagonist plan, so I can't wait to see exactly how it's totally the wrong thing to do.
Yeah, he would. Probably Lacunae would too.
Makes me wonder how an actual zebra shaman would do travelling through some Equestrian Stables.
Yes, Scotch, listen to your marefriend.
To make sure that the shamans of the shrine couldn't tell anyone he was spirit touched.
It is nice to know that the Shaman hasn't read the Evil Overlord List.
This sentence needs help.
Quite a few of them.
Because they wouldn't like you when you're angry?
I ... well, ok, he's not exactly wrong on this point.
Much like BJ, Scotch doesn't need help from a spirit in that department.
Well you should have a few days before Shaman wakes up from losing their grudge match with a rock.
You should. You won't, but you should.
Not exactly what I thought, but not too far off, either.
I hope this isn’t two dumb of a comment but I was working on hashing together a game system for shamans and I was curious what you thought a good base would be? Currently I’m eyeing the pledge mechanics from the game changeling the lost since it lets you craft magically potent deals with consequences for breaking them. Is that the correct direction to take for most shamans? And what about cases where it seems the shaman is directly doing something like our resident carrion Starkatteri and him decaying the trapped transport?
I'm curious. Does the Soul of the old shaman inside Pythia still a thing (from back in Project Horizons)? Even if it's not, I have an idea on how it could be.
The Soul of the shaman is actually Pythia's own soul. Actually it's every soul from every life she's lived and been reborn into. Every time she's reborn, Pythia keeps her soul from the previous life (or a piece of it). This would explain how her memories are so suppressed (or repressed). They're buried under hundreds of lifetimes of other memories.
Could you imagine the kind of cool Shaman powers she could do, if she could call upon the experience of a 1000 lifetimes? I smell an Avatar State reference coming!
Well, I've read PH twice, I'm all caught up on speak, so figured it was about time I got started reading this. Only a few chapters in so far, but I'm absolutely loving this story. It's super interesting getting to hear bit's about the travels with Blackjack from scotch's perspective. Also really nice to get to know more about Pythia and how the Starkatteri work in general.