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Forever

Re-done because the first one was pretty bad. (Pretty bad is quite an understatement too.)
Twilight Sparkle wants to keep her friends for as long as she would like, but her friends have other plans. Twilight traps Applejack in a cage after a fight and something breaks inside. Would she risk loosing the rest of her friends, or does she have another plan in store.

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Kolwynia

Kolwynia #1 · Jun 3rd, 2012 · · ·

This was interesting. You know, I should really learn to read the tags before I look at a story, but the cover image drew me in. I like how you put the characters in a situation where there is some enmity between them. Something disturbed me, though. I'm not sure if I can trust your Twilight. Part of me wants to sympathize with her, but I can't because I suspect she's crazy. I don't know, but there's something creepy about her.