Okay, now I know the empty bottle of whiskey on my desk 'looks' bad, but there's a perfectly sober explanation.
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yup gunna be watching this to see where it goes good job
a few spelling mistakes in this chapter but otherwise good
Holy shit. This is good. Love Dead Space, and you've done a pretty good job of blending it with pony. The AU take on Crystal Empire was a great choice.
Faved, and eagerly awaiting more!
Gotta love that dead space vibe.
Brilliant, the scene is set for a bowl emptying adventure, onwards, to the next chapter!
Oh man. I'm hoping the girls are alive and that this ends better then the games ever did. Please end like the Dead Space 2 where they got out alive. (Yes, I 'm still bitter about us being left hanging with DS3.)
This is getting quite good. can't wait to see what happens next.
Just drop Clark in and you have a hell storm of undead killing. YEAH!!
quite the chapter. nice amount of action and gore. also just wanted to say your writing has definitely improved quite a bit since the first chapter of this keep up the good work
Always enjoy seeing this update. I find this to be a fairly good adaptation of the dead space universe into the world of pony. Very much look forward to the next chapter
Huh, suitably horrifying start. Applejack and Fluttershy fleeing through corriders, hiding in ventilation shafts and cupboards, talking about how everyone else has been lost, culminating in something falling upon Applejack and, presumably, tearing her to pieces.
Is this story going to continue?
Hope to see more soon
My money's on the library being a slaughter house
This removes any doubts I had that this was simply residual marker energy
Great story you have here, I would love to see it continue
Good story so far, though I am gonna take a guess that shining is crazier than the normal crazy from this. I feel he made a deal with the pillar that if he brings more ponies to it, than his wife and sister will be spared. After all, he said he would do anything for them