My name is Princess Mi Amore Cadenza, and I am a terrible pony.
I didn't mean to be. I never meant to be. But I am.
Written for the I'm the Villain of the Story contest.
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Simultaneously able to type 94 wpm and still take five years to finish a story. If you're feeling generous, throw a ko-fi at me.
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Well, this is brutal. I like it.
That's.....something else.....
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I certainly earned the tags, didn't I...
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Eeyup
Heheheh...ahh...
I haven't read it yet because I'm on my phone and mom has the computer (I'll just wait till she's asleep. Mueheheheh).
But I intend to!
I hope that Rare counts this story in with the entries, seeing as it was posted a day after the deadline. It says that for me anyway. Maybe you live somewhere else?
Anywho, good luck, and break a leg!
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Thanks! Good luck to you, too!
It was finished before the deadline, so I'm hoping it counts.
OOOOH OOOH
TWIST
SUBTLE TWIST THAT WAS BRILLIANTLY PUT
OOOOOOOOOOOOH
Certainly not wrong there,heavy but compulsive reading, and those last 2 paragraphs.....
This is just great.
This should probably have an alternate universe tag.
While it doesn't happen in the story, but I would be very interested in reading Cadance do this.
That was good but I think it would have been more emotional if Twilight and Cadance's fight had been less one-sided.
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Ugh...listen, this started mildly interesting. I like that Cadence was able to flare or quench emotions, and she leaned into it a bit too much. That is fine. I am fine with the consecuences it had on her, and I am fine with Shining Armor's death being her turning point.
But the scenes of evil her interacting with everyone else felt so...artificial. It is like she put on her evil hat, and now she is comically evil because err...evil.
And then, to top it off, what she does to her son after she was freed. So unnecessary.
That twist ending... I didn't really like it but it did make me gasp with a little 'omg'. But yeah, great story overall.