Queen Chrysalis has hatched a plan to take the crown from Princess Celestia. Her primary adversary Twilight Sparkle is occupied with her duties as the Princess of Friendship this opens an opportunity for Queen Chrysalis to act. Our heroine starts as a victim but earns a special place on Chrysalis' list of most annoying ponies as Sakura consistently ruins the Changeling Queen's plans. Sakura falls into the position of heroine strictly by accident as such she strives to stop Chrysalis from taking the crown.
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Overall a decent first story, some issues with time passing and telling instead of showing and a bit of grammar but nothing that can't be fixed with a bit of practice, keep it up!
Oh boy. where to start. This fic is like a laundry list of what not to do when trying to write a good fanfiction. Aside from Sakura and Sasami being a blatant Mary Sues this is filled with spelling errors, out of character moments and nonsensical plot lines. Most of which i could forgive mind you if it weren't for the fact that this fic is bad. Not even the good bad were it's so bad it's fascinating to read, similar to how people slow down on the highway to see the little Honda Civic that got pancaked by a semi. No this is the fender bender at the corner of a busy intersection type of bad. Not interesting, not worth note and is just an inconvenience really. The biggest problem is just how bland the writing is. It's like trying to choke down gruel with nothing added to spice up the flavor. Difficult and kinda painful at times. If you told me to put a number value to this I'd give it a 15 10 20.