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I added this to my read later. Went into read later. This story is next to another story with the same picture, but flipped and with the colors normal. I compare descriptions and now I know what you're poking fun at.
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We're just hilarious, aren't we?
6737478 Top kek.
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Glad you really enjoyed it, man! Yeah, Scarlet's a genius when it comes to character development. Really happy I've got 'em for a partner in making this story, since it wouldn't be anywhere near as good as it is without him and the rest of our team.
It's a real team effort, and I'm happy to see it's paying off!
6747130 Thanks for the comment!
We're actually going to go back through the story in a few days to try to make it a bit more cohesive now that we're more familiar with the characters, so criticism like this actually really helps.
And, while I want to respond to some specific things you noted, we have pretty much the entire rest of the fic all planned out. Some of them are definitely addressed, but how they're addressed would be pretty big spoilers to some of my favorite upcoming bits.
So, while some stuff like the weird characterization in the earlier chapters will hopefully be caught and fixed when we go back through it, for some of the other stuff all I can say is "wait and see".
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Okay, cool. And I'll note again that this is just my reaction, and I'm bouncing off the story, and no story is going to be able to satisfy every reader. Definitely get a second opinion, or else use this as a prompt for your internal discussions about what y'all want Lash's role to be (and how you want to approach the overall theme), because "we're having too much fun writing him how he is" is a totally legitimate response.
And I do agree with 6744683 that lines like
are fantastic, and that "quarter vampire by marriage" is right in my sweet spot of absurdity. Don't throw away the comedy as you grow the beard!
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As one of the authors, I can say with certainty that this story began as a parody, and will continue to be a parody, no matter what happens in the story. We'll keep the laughs coming, despite all the action and seriousness going on. Nobody's losing their sense of humor in this, trust us!
And, shockingly enough, this is how Eye was designed. But I can't say too much on that front, spoilers n' such. But yeah, what you pointed out concerning how Eye acts?
It's just got us nodding our heads at a job well done.