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BaconedCake
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This story isn't crappy. It actually has a lot of potential
>>Prince Gray
^_^ made my day
Cute one-shot. Assuming it's still that and the incomplete tag is in error. If not, then more to enjoy I'm sure.
There are a few errors, but overall, for the fact that you wrote it so fast it is really good.
Such a bittersweet story after the joyous occasion of them getting their cutie marks.....
Scootaloo hinted at it that they could never help ponies getting their cutie marks for some reason and Applebloom said that she doesn't want to be remembered on the past. I'm intrigued. What did happen to them?
You're going to continue this, right? Because this really needs more chapters.
>>Fluttercheer
Wait. . . Scootaloo hinted that they could never help other ponies? Where?
Also, I didn't realize I was expected to continue. . . I'll try to suit your expectations, though
6568982
How can it be that I haven't seen this answer?
You haven't noticed? But you are the author of this story.....
It's here:
"No way! Imagine, guys, if we give them the clubhouse as a venue, we can help other foals without cutie marks find their destiny," Scootaloo cheered. Her face softened."Just like we wanted when we were little fillies."
She says "we wanted", not "we did". She's implying here that they never helped other foals without cutie marks to find their destinies.
And then "her face softened", like she just got sad over thinking about it.
Meaning that they never managed it for some reason.
Of course! You can't write such an intriguing chapter that hints at a tragic past of them where things didn't go as planned with their special talents as they expected and then let us hang!
We need to see this continued!
>>Fluttercheer
Oh crap. . . I never noticed that
ahaha. . . .
Gosh I'm so stupid XD
Anyway, I'll just pretend that my idea the whole time was they never felt satisfied enough with their work and wanted to do something bigger-I MEAN WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT THAT WAS MY PLAN ALL ALONG I TOTALLY DIDN'T MAKE THAT UP ON THE SPOT
That's a good reason actually. . .I feel like I should implement it into the story somehow
But, as I said, I'll try to exceed your expectations with the story
But now, the old ones are gone. . .
6581174
Uhhh. . . what do you mean?
Oh.
Oh.
Buck.
6581253 It's a reference to a song I know of.