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Cute H Unknownia


Hope makes your dreams fly higher!

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a bunch of ponies are playing Pathfinder at Twilight's castle, when they get sucked into the game.

How will they get passed the dangers of Pathfinder? And even more importantly, how will they get home?

Read to find out!

Chapters Edited: TurnWrongTheCrusader, Chapter 1

(Rated T for little violence, maybe gore later.)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 17 )

Man that is a big ass Pathfinder table. I wouldn't have gone more then 5 players, 6 tops.

Also send them to Irrisen. You know, for funzies. Thats a good country for talking ponies.

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Oh good because nothing bad will happen there. I hope they find a house with a small doll in it. That will end well.

Hope they can make the will save.

6514926 I searched what it was online, and got a completely different answer then what you just said, it was about an evil queen and witches.

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Oh Irrisen has a nice rich history. If you are pulling stuff online, you want to go to the Wiki at http://www.pathfinderwiki.com/wiki/

Then if you actually play pathfinder, Reign of Winter for when you just want to watch things be killed by Jadwiga,winter wolves, and Russians.

Ok, not going to lie, it seems like you have a good outline for a story, it just comes off disjointed. However, I do see something of a plot going. Maybe take a look at some of the writing tutorials and check out related stories to get a good frame. But what do I know, I don't write, I DM games and bend prewritten material to my own imagination (translation, I know nothing).

Either way it looks like you stuck Celestia into Elvanna's position (making her the 14th daughter of Baba Yaga). Nice.

It helps that I know the content you are writing for (I play more Pathfinder in Golarian then any sane person should) and you went to Irrisen which that and Drow are about the two things I know really, really well in that world.

Drow are dicks btw. Also there are no good drow, just less evil ones.

Either way I would love to see a good Pathfinder/MLP crossover fic. They would also shit bricks if they were in Cheliax.

6516703 Two spoilers, The next few chapters are about Rainbow

And They're also about Corentyn

Comment posted by viclouiis deleted Oct 12th, 2015

6516703 Sorry, I think I got hacked, this is Cute H Unknownia's Alt. I forgot my password, so I can't log back on.

6540834 Sadly, that means there won't be anymore Pathfinder. :pinkiesick:

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Is what it is. I say go back over it and maybe renew it someday.

Intresting. I'm going to follow this and see where it goes. :trollestia:

6637588 Okay, I think I'll remove this from my old account and post it on the one I actually still use. (This one.)

6637588 Okay! I'm mostly using my alt account Flight right now, but I might right some on this account too!

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