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The Sparkle Family, wherein lies mares and stallions of noble hearts, and blazing spirits. Beginning with the noblemare Dusk Sparkle, and her encounters with a ruthless Earth Pony by the name of Divine Earth. Follow the eternal tale of the Sparkle Clan, as they battle evils that plague Equestria...

And their bizzare adventures!

(Crossover with JoJo's Bizzare Adventure)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 51 )

So, the curtain rises on an eternal tale...

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6512352 Hmm, I'm already thinking of that

6512361 Also, do you plan of using the same musically inspired names for characters? Because it's never a bad idea to plan out a story's details beforehand.

I'm guessing that Divine Earth is Dio Brando and Dusk Sparkle is Jonathan Joestar? Speaking of which, I know that Twilight will be in the story, but how about Spike and Shining Armor?

Ths might as well be the genderbent version of Jojo's Bizzare Adventure.

I can understand Rarity taking on Gio's role, but how does Twilight fit as Jotaro again?

6546543 Yes, they shall, and Twilight will be a slightly nicer Jotaro, still willing to kick ass, but willing to try and talk. Also, Shining will be the Avdol of this fic, and Spike, possible Iggy. I'm still wondering on who to have as the Polnareff of this fic

6547254 In this crossover. "Jotaro" and "Avdol" are related, huh? Why not have Pinkie Pie as Polnareff? Speaking of which, will an OC take on the role of Joseph? I can tell that RD will be "Caesar" already.

6547924 I'll have Twi's dad take over for Joseph, with RD's mom, Firefly, as Caesar

6549474 I'm guessing that Twilight Velvet will be Lisa Lisa and RD might be Kakyoin?

6549624 Well, Velvet will be the Suzie Q of the story, as for who shall be Lisa Lisa, hmm...

6549631 I'm guessing that Apple Bloom might be Josuke, but what about Holly? Also, Fleur is Zeppeli? I almost forgot! Who's going to be Speedwagon!? And the Pillar Men!?

6549642 The three Alicorns mentioned in the prologue will be the Pillar Men, Scootaloo will be Joskue, Holly, hmm, will probably be Moondancer, who, instead of being Jotaro's mom, will be Twi's sister, and Speedwagon, Pinkie's ancestor

6549654 So... Moondancer is playing two roles?

6549674 I don't think I've ever mentioned Moondancer in the fic. But Shining is Avdol, Pinkie is Polnareff, Divine shall be DIO, etc. Also, did you catch the actual JoJo reference in A Hellish Youthood? In their fencing instructor?

6549679 He reminded me of the boxing teacher from Phantom Blood.

6549965 He wears armor, he wields a rapier, His master was from ponyfied France, who became a qaudreplegic, and killed by a ponyfied Italian gang....and his name

6549965 Also, I think that was an announcer/referee

Dusk chuckled lightly, continuing on. Her father and mother had asked her to take their matching pistols, Ivory and Ebony

I'm guessing that Dusk Sparkle is also a descendant of Dante Sparda?

6549980 So, it's none other than Silver Chariot and the master was Polnareff, right?

6550045 Yup, Silver Chariot Requiem found a purpose after Polnareff died and kind of got a new body. He trains Equines and other races in the art of fencing.

6550050 If Silver Chariot can be reincarnated, how about Magician's Red and Star Platinum?

Holy Diver. That almost seems like it would have been a better name for the DIO of this story.

6550884 I was thinking of doing that, but perhaps like Dio Brando (Dio means God in Italian, so Divine fit), became DIO, perahps Divine shall became Holy Diver, think about it. She is likely to kill Dusk, and after possibly taking her body, will take the name of her lover

6550897 I only say that because of the song Holy Diver by Ronny James Dio.

6550916 True, I'll think of changing it, and I knew about that

Oh my God! Diokno! You finally got around to writing that JBA story you were talking about! And it's actually really good! Why didn't you tell me!?
LateBronyWriter

6651293 I wanted to tell you, but I kind of forgot, sorry

6651472 That's okay. I just was really excited that I found it. Glad you finally finished the opening part! I look foreword to your next chapter
LateBronyWriter

Well, Dusk does seem to be quite a spoilt bitch from how you've wrote her. I mean, in the first paragraph, Divine does prove herself to be better than her and the only thing I'm getting out of this is that Dusk is jealous because her adopted sis is better than her whereas we are shown that Dio does mock and belittle Jonathan under his breath.

Plus, why Silver Chariot? Why have a tonne of focus on him but nothing to indicate that he's anyone actually important other than an in-joke?

6753106 Don't worry, this won't be the last we see of Silver Chariot

I was worried that Dio might have done something worse to Erina.

6880132 One of my friends actually asked if he was going to rape her when he saw the scene, and well, do you really wanna know what Divine did to Blue Skies?

6880152 I'll bet five bucks Blue Skies was castrated. Of course I want to know what Dio really did.

6880166 No, he still has his junk, but let's say it still wasn't pleasant

She wore a well tailored forest green suit, which complimented her cream fur, piercing sanguine eyes, and prim cornsilk mane and tail.

DIOOOOOOO! No, wait, you haven't done anything wrong yet.

Divine smirked, "You see Blue, you thought your first true kiss would come from Dusk, no? Your first didn't come from Sparky, it came from I, Divine!"

KONO DIVINE DA!

Phantom Hive estate

IS THAT A KUROSHITSUJI REFERENCE!?

So, uh, will this be continued?

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Perhaps, and shit, you reminded me of this, back when I was a budding author and just got into JoJo

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