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Zarius9998


:D X3 =^-^= <3 :P ô_ō -_- Ó_Ò ...enough said, I think...okay, maybe not, but, Eh, oh well.

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Spin-off of "Haylo: A New World"!

During the fall of Equis, a certain ebony mare just wanted it all to go away...when that didn't happen, she came to the conclusion that EVERYONE MUST DIE.

Follow the origins and members of the those responsible for doing those missions deemed to insane or immoral for the general Army! You'll meet a silent Rookie, a cold Widow, an untraceable Ghost, and the definition of Demon itself, and discover that, when given nothing but insane options, it's best to be insane yourself.

Chapters (25)
Comments ( 113 )

34694
Indeed. With her (ebony mare), the gloves are ALWAYS off! :rainbowdetermined2:

Rightly sounds like a journal, or a retelling of events like in a Debrief. Nice.

37544

Wow, nice guess! :rainbowhuh: How'd you know...? I mean!-you heard nothing... :trixieshiftleft: :trixieshiftright:

uhhhhmm......no dead ponies?

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I should've known that's the only reaction I'd recieve...:ajbemused: It was thanksgiving, I wanted everypony to be HAPPY, not covered in blood...glad you're enjoying the story though! It makes me feel SO GOOD INSIDE to see that I have people following this story who only take their time to comment if they find something different that what they're expecting...WHICH WAS A MAJOR POINT BEHIND THIS CHAPTER, BY THE WAY.

:facehoof: :raritycry: :rainbowhuh: :pinkiesick: :fluttercry: :ajsleepy:

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*looks down ashamed*........i don't celebrate thanksgiving. im dutch, althou we dutch were at the first thanksgiving we never took it over in our country so as the fun for you i found the best sentence ever hope you enjoy

at a execution
sergeant: fire
*BANG*
sergeant:......how could you miss?

40671
*looks down ashamed*........i don't celebrate thanksgiving. im dutch, althou we dutch were at the first thanksgiving we never took it over in our country so as the fun for you i found the best sentence ever hope you enjoy

at a execution
sergeant: "fire"
*BANG*
sergeant:......"how could you miss"?40715
soldier: "he moved sir"

I about to read this looks good, but I have one question.
Is the title to the new chapter making a reference to Neon Genesis Evangelin 1.11 You Are (not) Alone?

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I actually thought of that after I made the name...so no, no relation, intentionally. But cookies for realizing the similarity! :moustache:
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I might just do that sometime... :rainbowdetermined2:
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I'm sorry for snapping at you...it's just, I was kind in a depressed mood at the end of the day and I was hoping to get some cheery comments...I'm REALLY SORRY, honestly! :pinkiesad2: And really, it doesn't matter if you don't celebrate Thanksgiving or any other Holiday that I would, the messages in that chapter still stand. I may write stories about sadistic Psycho's, bloody battles, and creepy/perverted mares, but I'm actually a very mellow and emotional person. :twilightsmile: ...but yeah, bloody battles and awesome kill-shots coming soon, hehe...

Well, this fic is obviously void of any epic machinima references.

And that's how crappy sarcasm is preformed!

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:moustache: Clearly, sir, you are a master of sarcasm. :ajsmug:
I run half my entertainment value on references. :trixieshiftleft: :trixieshiftright:

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Sorry bout' that! :twilightsheepish: You can either incorporate it somehow, or just ignore it...And "The color You Bleed" is already a fic about Blueblood...though nothing to with Haylo. :ajsmug:

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I know, and as much as it fits...I still like the Simplicity of the title as it is...I like the simple, yet still all-telling (in an off way) Titles.

A minor error: It his him square in the face, his head reeling backwards while he dropped the Assault rifle.

Other than that, epic fight.

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Aaaaaaand FIXED! :raritystarry: Thanks for pointing that out, and thanks for the compliment! :twilightsmile:

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Don't worry, just read the story, it'll be explained. :duck:

0o:rainbowderp:.........oke........:twilightsmile:

God I love Washington!:rainbowdetermined2: Cant believe I didn't track this before, can you ever forgive me?:ajsleepy:

Indeed, this chapter was very classy :duck:
Keep it up!

Crimson team is awesome:yay: It took that he was mentioned by name that I figured out Rookie was Pipsquek:pinkiecrazy:

Keep it up! You know... if you want to

Your spin-off is so much better than mine! :raritycry:

What's your secret? :twilightblush:

Ain't no rest for the Wicked' by Cage the Elephant
great song. and this chapter, perfect for the coming storm

Yay! Big burling alien life forms and mentions of 500 year old video games! :pinkiehappy:

so i have a question. why aren't they using those gogles were you can see in the dark.

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"Remember, our night vision needs light to work. It can't amplify zero." Ghost reminded, "I would have installed the better one's that produce their own...um, stuff...Uh, I really don't think you want me to get into the specifics..."

"Agreed, egghead." Artemis interjected, snickering.

"Right...so anyway, yeah, we just don't have the funds to do it." he concluded just as Widow started to walk forwards, "Anywho, what's the plan, boss?"
:ajsmug:

85056 It would, wouldn't it? :trollestia: Anywho...SLIGHT change to make Luna's stuff a bit more in-canon with Halo...but now Luna has quite a bit of Swag. :moustache:

I envy Pip for getting that from Artemis..

86171 Oh no-nono! Don't encourage h-HMF!

Artemis- :trollestia: :rainbowkiss: :rainbowwild: Really now! :trixieshiftleft: :trixieshiftright: C'mere, then... :heart:

Me- Don't trust her she's just trying to be a :trollestia: !

Artemis- Shut up! :fluttercry: ... :trollestia: :rainbowlaugh:

98264 :trollestia: That is true...but did you know that dies never Spartan, they are just actioning in miss? :trollestia: But yeah, um...this Diana...can ANYPONY make the connection? There's a reason for her name...a pretty fancy one, too. :moustache:

98313 god when i hear that name i think of cortana why diana diana why do i know this women

98346 Hmm...do you have proficient knowledge in Greek and Roman Mythology, perhaps? C'mon! make both Twilight and I proud! MAKE THE CONNECTION!...but if you DO make the connection, please PM it to me and don't put it here or I will delete it...I want it to be a big surprise when I finally reveal the whole thing. :trollestia:

99840 I would sure hope my story matches with itself...canyou decipher her clue, hmm?

I figured it out, but I'm not going to say it here hehehe :pinkiehappy:

OOOH MY I TOOTAL FORGOT TO READ THIS STORY. wait this story is a week old. oh my, my laptop is open for more then a week :pinkiegasp:

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