:D X3 =^-^= <3 :P ô_ō -_- Ó_Ò ...enough said, I think...okay, maybe not, but, Eh, oh well.
Not related to any of my other stories, for the most part. Luna, with her time as twilight's assistant, has grown close to the unicorn, even going so far as to find her as a love interest! But what about her previous plans to serve some justice to her older sister? Will she be able to carry out plans to hurt her love's mentor? Will she be found-out? Or will Twilight be enough to sate Luna's anger?...wait...who says she can't do both at once!?
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Hmm. Interesting plot, and having it written from Luna's POV makes it that bit more enticing. The only downsides are the odd mistake (I'm quite stringent with my grammar) and the length; it's a bit short. However, if the story quality persists, I'd be happy recommending this to others. A good read so far, and I'll be keeping an eye on it.
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"Hah, we realize that this is indeed short, and we are severely sorry about that. Though we are glad that you enjoy it! Our goal with this fantastic story was to entertain...and express some of our opinions on our whole situation with being sent to the moon and whatnot...oh, look at us, rambling on about or grievances and such. We are sorry for acting in such a manner of which royalty should not...we...I mean I...am also sorry for forgetting that referring to ones self in a plural tense, even if one IS royalty, isn't really an accepted norm anymore. You MUST forgive my slowness with social meetings...I'm still getting used to my return from the moon..."
Okay, now that the princess is done with apologizing and being awkward...I'm normally a stickler for grammar as well...but I'm also very prone to missing things here and there. While I try to scan y chapters for ANY mistakes, please forgive me for missing some! Glad you enjoy the story, tho!
Aww, darn, and here I was hoping that Celestia WOULD be given some punishment; being sent to the sun would be oh so perfect! Regardless, anything with two of my top five favorite ponies (Twilight and Luna) involved makes me interested, so nice job so far.
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"Now we do not recall saying she would not be punished...we mea-I-I mean I!...didn't say she would not be punished...*facehoof*"
Luna, you so awkward. Glad you enjoy the story!
ooh, i'm enjoying this one. Keep up the good work.
Oh god, the POV from Luna is simply amazing. Can't wait to see more.
Lol get back at Celestia by suducing twilight, I like it.
22990 Who, in their right mind, would NOT enjoy watching two Goddess-like Sisters battle it out through the attention and pleasures of their most loved other...? I'll tell you. Lord Buzzkillington.
I can't wait to see how Twilight reacts to all of this, granted it was funny seeing her faint but finding out that Luna wasn't just playing with her and intends to court her is sure to blow her mind. I mean this is a gold mine here she is still learning how to be a true friend and on top of that and her role as something akin to celestia's specail task force leader she's been thrown into the whirlwind known as romantic love ah I love it.
This is GENIUS! Janus has pretty much typed all my thoughts, I look forward to reading more
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Do NOT worry! I am WORKING on this story still...even though I haven't updated it in forever...
I had block, I started another story, and now that I'm almost done that story, I will start updating THIS one again! :D already done the next two chapters, too!
Glad I still have ponies interested in this.
ah damn, why cant there be MOOOOORE!
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No, don't worry! I'm still working on it! I'm un the middle of a LOT of school, and am trying desperately to finish another story. After I finish that story (of which there are only two or so more chapters), I will continue putting up chapter for this, I promise!
Haha, I like it when people complain about more.
The story is nice though.
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I know it is...and I really badly want to get back to work on this, but I'm just so busy with schooooooooooooooooooooool.
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I think we all are busy with school, haha. At least some of us, aka you and other people who are writing, are doing your best to work on other projects too. Just take your time with it, best to have the story to your liking then just half-butt it and make you regret writing.
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Thank you! 
once finals are over i think the readers will get swamped with a shit storm of material from the writers material thats been held off becouse of both work and school.
also it'll be nice to see the updates roll in for once.
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so keep on keepen on good story and all i'll love seeing its updates.
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Agreed, 100%
Cheese, man, I want to get back to this story.
496103 and may solis te luna watch over us all.
I really like this story hope to read more soon