• Published 8th Oct 2015
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Luna's treats. - MrAquino



A Hungry Princess Luna enters a new world and finds some delicious treats: 6 Human teenagers in costume at Halloween night.

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The sun came rose from the east, shining over the small town and it's residents. Inside her family's house, Emily's eyes were hit by the sun's rays, making her stir and get up. She was sitting next to her computer chair, looking at a black screen, but turned around. Though groggily, she saw her friends, all safe and sound; Jack was snoring loudly on the couch, Samantha on a chair, Carlos on the floor with his butt in the air, and Jessica laying on the floor with a trashcan over her head. Billy entered the room, seeing everyone, but turned to Emily with a smile.

"Morning Sleepy Head." He spoke

Mornin'." Emily replied, getting up. "What happened last night?"

"We had a party, remember?"

"...Yeah... at one of the other's classmates homes?"

"What!? Nah, they were cancelled before we could get there, so we had one here."

"Oh. Really?"

"I didn't drink Jack's 'special punch', that's for sure."

"...huh... I could've sworn about what happened last night."

"And that was?"

"Never mind. It's... it's just weird."

"Almost as weird as how you all watched that video last night?"

"Video?"

"Twilight's Nightmare. Some weird video regarding something called... Vore?" She froze. A flashback came to her showing what happened.

"You mean... that video."

"Is that what you thought happened last night?"

"Eh... Kinda."

"Tell me about it."

"Uh... you promise not to tell anyone?"

"I promise."

"Do you Pinkie Promiese." Billy let out an annoyed sigh as he did the actions.

"Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye."

"...Okay. You know how I draw Anthro versions of MLP?"

"Yeah. They're not half bad."

"Ok. Well, Luna came to us, all nice and all. I was freaking out like a fan girl, talking to her and introducing us to her. It was all fine until-" Emily continued on with her dream. How Luna accidentally ate Jack, but thought he was tasty, and began to hunt everyone down. When she was finished, Billy chuckled at it.

"You are a really strange girl, you know that?" She blushed

"Eh, it was a dream."

"Ha! What's next? Everyone is in Equestria, but we're tiny to the ponies?" She giggled at his remark.

"Yeah! That's ~So~ gonna happen next!" They both walked out of the front door, most likely heading to the mall to get some snacks. They stopped as they opened the door; outside, there was grass. Though this would be fine, the grass was just as tall as them, and the trees aroun them were, if not, taller than skyscrapers! The ground shook as large shadows loomed over them. They turned around to see what was Twilight Sparkle and her friends, all as their pony selves, but towering over them!

"Look girls!" Twilight announced, her voice not booming, surprisingly. "Humans!" Rarity walked to the house, her horn glowed it's recognizable blue aura, surrounded the roof, and took it right off easily.

"Ah! There's more in here!" she announced "One for each of us!" Jack, Carlos, Samantha, and Jessica woke up, seeing the towering equines, screamed, and ran out of the door. Both Billy and Emily ran for their lives, following their friends.

"I love it when they run like that!" Rainbow Dash smirked as she flared her wings.

"Ah do too." Applejack replied, stomping her hooves, ready to charge.

"Let's not be rough with them, though." Fluttershy added. "They just look so cute!" A flash of pink ran by them.

"ICALLTHECANDYDRESSEDONE!!!" Pinkie yelled at once. The rest ran after the six humans!

"Why did you jinx it!?" Emily yelled

The end

Author's Note:

This is the OFFICIAL ending!!! There's going to be a sequel called 'Tales from Tinies', an anthology of random stories, all centering tiny humans and huge ponies; Some are vore, some are cuddling, others are just cuteness, but all will be random

Comments ( 8 )

Ooh, I can't wait for the day when the Big and Small group notifies me of your sequel! :pinkiehappy:

You what'd make it even better? If you'll allow the readers to create a non-OC chapter and have them PM you the chapters for publishing! :raritystarry:

6627540 hm... not a bad idea. Care for one? I'm making the first two chapter/short tales.
first is a 1st person of a lone human exploring in the cold, freezing, but finds rescue by Lyra... who swallows him on accident, but finds out humans are tasty and learns that they may have a special magic that keeps them alive.
Second is a tale of a small girl finding some magical fruit for her mom in the Canterlot gardens.

6627688 Those two aren't bad ideas themselves, but I'm thinking more of someone volunteering to make one or maybe a few chapters for your story. Personally, Mayor Mare, Applejack, Big MacIntosh, and Zecora are my main interests. :raritywink:

6631451 Ah! I guess that'll work as well. I'll give all the credit to the original creator, though I might edit some things.
Plus, I think A.J. would be a vore thing (A small group of humans taking an Apple away.)
Big Mac would be a body exploring tale (Just some humans learning about Big Mac by climbing him and exploring his innards, but for science.)
I have no idea for Zecora or Mayor Mare (Potion testing and Diplomatic talking?)

6631451 Bam! Tiny Tales
Feel free to message me some of your tales.

6648207 Will do. Thanks!

I feel like there were simply too many characters. 3 or 4 is THE limit a reader can "learn" at a given time. Throwing 6 at the audience then immediately running off with the story was just too much. I ended up just blank facing the characters and totally forgetting/ignoring who was who. At the end I could only recall that Emily was dressed as Princess Luna and Jessica was the traitor. The others? Didn't even seem to matter. They were just blank faced anons. Bodies that spoke a few times.

7867613 Nice, but she's clothed

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