Equestria's past and future has never been set in stone. A single pebble sends ripples through the fabric of time, and now nothing is the same.
An ancient being rules a kingdom with an iron, yet playful fist.
His apprentice questions her loyalty, both to herself and to her country.
An earth pony leads a revolution against a ruler who may be a tyrant.
A pegasus learns to fly on her own merit, but struggles to face reality.
A unicorn desperately tries to convince a dear friend that murder is not, and never will be the answer.
A farmer tries to find another way to live, and yet cannot even fathom why she has been left here.
A pony who loves nothing binds herself to the ground, desperately searching for a reason to exist.
And two princesses are trapped together in stone, communicating to the only one who can save them in the only way they can.
The board is set. The die is cast. Fates are never linear, and the cards lie through their teeth to get what they want. Who will live, and who will die? Who will fall and who will fly?
Dear reader, I apologize...
But that is not for you to decide.
Since I have a hard time telling my thoughts on stories beyond "I like it!" I can't really say anything. I can't wait to see more so you're doing stuff right. Tracking.
Can't think of anything else to add so have a cat.
That's good because I crave cats!
Excellent premis can't wait to see where you go with this.
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Writing up the next bit, decided to go with that old trope of "Introduce everyone then interweave the story."
Shut up, I'm lazy.
At this point, all I can do is complement your writing ability! ^_^
It's very technically competent, and the whole things flows very well! ^_^
Characterizations seem to be spot on, from what I can see! ^_^
This is a really interesting story. Hope to see another chapter soon.