I'm still following this story. I am a fan of Overlord, but I should mention I felt the anthro and hostile (ambushing) nature of the work sort of takes away from the story. From the story Overlord we've seen at least one character, the blob member in the beginning, have a body type that is uniquely non-humanoid, and thus implies that Overlord had non-humanoid races to play. Well, it's not a big loss, but it could have still worked, even with Barb (as Spike is bipedal). The story is still interesting and I do appreciate the large collection of non-human former NPC characters such as the catgirl and lizardgirl. The links you provide in the story do help with visualizing stuff, though honestly if the keep looked like it did in the image, it should have been visible from some distance away.
I'm not a big fan of the ponies setting up an ambush against a leader of a faction when no hostile action had been taken by him, it doesn't sit well with me. Even his subjects are happy from all indications, so it strikes me as an out of character moment. Especially when Twilight herself doesn't understand the magic used.
7425341 They who do not understand fear, they who fear destroy, they who destroy become the things others do not understand. Such is the fate of those who suffer ignorance. PS. Its alive...It's ALIVE!!!
it's alive!! i'm so happy to see this history been updated again.
I'm still following this story. I am a fan of Overlord, but I should mention I felt the anthro and hostile (ambushing) nature of the work sort of takes away from the story. From the story Overlord we've seen at least one character, the blob member in the beginning, have a body type that is uniquely non-humanoid, and thus implies that Overlord had non-humanoid races to play. Well, it's not a big loss, but it could have still worked, even with Barb (as Spike is bipedal). The story is still interesting and I do appreciate the large collection of non-human former NPC characters such as the catgirl and lizardgirl. The links you provide in the story do help with visualizing stuff, though honestly if the keep looked like it did in the image, it should have been visible from some distance away.
I'm not a big fan of the ponies setting up an ambush against a leader of a faction when no hostile action had been taken by him, it doesn't sit well with me. Even his subjects are happy from all indications, so it strikes me as an out of character moment. Especially when Twilight herself doesn't understand the magic used.
7425341 They who do not understand fear, they who fear destroy, they who destroy become the things others do not understand.
Such is the fate of those who suffer ignorance.
PS. Its alive...It's ALIVE!!!
twilight and luna hmmmmmm i do see it why them not saying its a bad shipping i just dont see why
When is the next chapter supposed to be out? Lol
I eagerly await the oncoming storm... "The Guild sends their regards"...
Discord's reign