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Lone Stallion


Some guy writing on his smartphone

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They're anthro because I'm not into bestiality and there WILL be sex... eventually.

:facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

Bestiality: Sexual relations between a human and an animal.

Would you really call a sapient being capable of intelligent thought, one that is able to express consent by the means of spoken language, a mere animal?

I know that this matter bears little relevance to the actual story, but it irks me when people misuse that term. I personally don't pay much attention to the forms the characters take in clopfics and romances—this way I can enjoy the actual story for what it is no matter if its characters are human, anthro, quadruped, or take other, more exotic forms.

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You raised a valid point. The description will be changed to reflect this.

Admittedly it was very late when I wrote it and my brain wasn't at its best.

eh, I like the anthropomorphic approach more personally, makes this easier to picture in my head. I Like what I am reading so far and interested on what develops, Pass the popcorn Discord things are going to be interesting.

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Funny you should mention Discord. He's due to make an appearance soon.

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Please read the Author's Note in chapter 2.

Okay! New chapter finally ready! Per my rules, there will be a delay while certain people are given a chance to go over it before I go public. I'll make it available to everyone on Wednesday, March 30th.

I realize this one took way too long getting out. I can point to things like how I had/have stuff going on, how Discord showing up caused severe writer's block, or how this chapter is almost as long as all the other ones combined... but really, I just seem to have a hard time simply sitting down and writing.

My only real defense is that I started writing out some of the later segments that I'm looking forward too / got inspired for as a way to try and work around the writer's block, so when I get up to those points in the story I'll have a bit of a head start. Until then, can probably expect months to go by without a new chapter.

It is what it is.

Thanks to everyone who takes the time to read my story, and a big thanks for anyone who leaves a comment.

oh, oh this is gonna be gooood...
(LOVE THIS, BY THE WAY!) :pinkiehappy:

why do the numbers start at 2

Huh, no cross-over chapters? That's quite surprising considering the age of the story.

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I was going to read it but then I saw no chapter one...

Come to think of it, where was Spike’s junk? Not that I was about to ask him.

Oh you just wait, Leon:rainbowlaugh:
When your junk disappears, you'll be blaring the alarm siren so loudly, that even those who are on a different planet can hear you:trollestia:

Been awhile I liked it so far let's see if it takes another year for this to update

I guess it could have been worse. Being with Twilight at least gave me someone interesting to talk to. Oh, and the whole electricity thing gives me a headache, too. Using crystals to send electricity wirelessly through the air? Mind-boggling.

Ever hear of a guy by the name of Tesla? The stuff he was trying to get mainstream and what he based that off of are SOME of the reasons he was put down like a rabid dog.

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Heh, I was wondering if anyone would make that connection. :twilightsmile: Glad you noticed.

8419464 I’ve heard multiple reasons Egypt had so many obelisks in and then when you take into account obelisks in North and South America, across Europe and many other places, you eventually (unless you believe that the government really does care about you) have to start wondering and start thinking.

Why does everyone feel the need to spout off there secrets about them being a kids show, its kind of getting annoying as I find that with every story, the story itself seems good though thanks.

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That's kind of funny. When I started writing this story, I was telling people how I was tired of all the humans showing up acting like they'd never heard of the show.

Glad you are enjoying it anyways. As Leon is almost a self-insert, it only made sense that he would know about the show like I do. I try to have him react the way I believe -I- would in that situation.

I had plans for this story that included touching on the whole issue of knowing the show but this place not being quite the same. Now I'm just trying to figure out if I'll ever start writing stories again.

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