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Mikleo
“It is better to be young in your failures than old in your successes.”
Mikleo
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This was confusing.
That was absolutely beautiful
“Death leaves a heartache no one can heal, love leaves a memory no one can steal.
From an Irish headstone” ― Richard Puz, The Carolinian
That was beautiful, had me fighting my tears then crying like a kid. I tip my hat and bow to you.
I had a dream last night about a friend of mine dying, I had a dream about another friend losing sight in her right eye and it came true, this was an amazing fanfic, thank you.
Please see Here for the determination as part of the Sad Story Writing Challenge Contest.
Not sure if you're still around, but here's your review courtesy of the Pleasant Commentator and Review Group!
Alright, after having seen our review of this story, I decided to read it for myself. My verdict is that the story isn't bad parse, but I still wouldn't recommend it to anyone.
That said, I will boldly say that I see the artistic intent in this story, and it is written better than most stories I have had to read in college.
It was rough to read though, and my mind felt split through it all... like a drug trip... pain killer drug trip... or just gaining consciousness from going under for surgery.
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7380595 I just came back, and I'm very thankful for the review. I've aimed to improve over these last few weeks, and hope I can take the advice from you guys and become a better writer. Thank you!
You've got me crying.... This is just.... Amazing
You should be pretty fucking proud of this.
You can has review!
Why is this not more popular? It’s such a great story. You almost made me cry, which is not an easy thing to do.
Eh. I get what you were going for, but it simply didn't resonate with me. There are many clever ideas here, but the tone drove down into melodrama too hard, lending a farsical air to some scenes, and characterizations were all over the place, to the point it would probably be better off as not-fanfic.
I hope one day Sunset can forgive Twilight too. That'd make an interesting sequel, not saying that there should be one, just saying it would be interesting.