Parn wants to be a great soldier rather than being a assistant gator keeper. Well… His luck may have come true. The family gator Gummy, has an ability to tell the future and it is said the Queen Chrysalis is looking for a legendary magical item known as The Black Cauldron. It is said that it has the power to resurrect and army of deathless warriors and can rule all of Equestria. Parn is now sent out on a quest to stop Chrysalis and her evil plans. Will Parn stop the changeling queen in time before she sets her plan in motion to take over Equestria?
Based off the film The Black Cauldron
Chapters (4)
An MLP crossover with The Black Cauldron. Now I've seen it all.
Not a bad start. A little rushed, and it needs some proofreading, but it's an interesting homage to one of my favorite Disney movies.
Get someone to go over this for grammar and punctuation, and slow it down a bit and extend the chapters, and it should be great. For now, I'll track this to see how it goes.
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perhaps some lodoss war as well, with Parn the kid with dreams of being a warrior?
You know I think out of all disney movies the black cauldren would have been the best choice for a remake. I mean image it with the effects and action that was in The Huntsman or Malifecent and they wouldn't need to change the story much. It has dark armys, a sword that doesn't need you to know how to weild it, horrifying monsters, curses and dark magic, and finally sacrifice. They wouldn't have to change it much to make it exciting and still be good
The game was better IMO.
"Been a long time since I seen that movie but the story right now is kinda rushed in the beginning. However in all this could be very interesting crossover and one I never seen before too."
-Johnny Bravo
You did a great ponified version of the original movie, and it's pretty well done, have you read Lloyd Alexander's original books the films was based on?
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I have in fact read the 2nd book.
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They should make a remake of it!!!
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I'll see what I can do
I'm not really a good writer and I'm still trying my best. My 1st fanfic sucks, but I'm gonna try better this time. Hopefully
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I'm surprised you caught that. Yes, I took the name Parn from "Record of Lodoss War". I'm just not good when it comes to OC names.
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Well, truth of it is, I play a LOT of D&D, and record of Lodoss War got it's start as a replay of a bunch of Japanese Dudes' D&D session
I wish you could continue this.
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OH I will
Very dark, I like it
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Sorry for the late reply, but I'm glad you do
Legitimate Question before I read, when it gets to the Cauldrons Army being born, is there gonna be a description of that deleted scene where the solider gets dissolved by the mist? I'm asking because I made the everyso regrettable decision of searching up the Black Cauldron Nightmare Fuel page on TV Tropes. I just wanna make sure here.