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Jarvy Jared


A writer and musician trying to be decent at both things. Here, you'll find some of my attempts at storytelling!

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This story is a sequel to Oh The Choices


This time, Twilight sits in a room. Well, kind of a room. Sort of a room. A room that can be morphed into various other rooms at one's own leisure. And who else is there but Discord, here to teach Twilight another lesson, this time concerning the concept of Chaos itself?

With the Spirit of Disharmony as her teacher, she can at least guarantee that things will get interesting.


While this is the sequel to Oh The Choices, reading that story is not necessary to understand this one. Though, I do encourage you all to give it a read.

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This story was just awesome!
I love the idea of Discord teaching Twilight about of how complicated and twisted the concepts of Harmony and Chaos are. :raritystarry:

Another shiner, these two stories deserve so much more credit than what they have had. I loved them both :raritywink::heart:

Wow, this fic really made me think:derpyderp2: i loved it so much!:pinkiehappy: Discord, a teacher? sounds brilliant:rainbowwild: This fic is very nicely written. I learned a lot about writing and vocabulary by reading. it. You truely are a great writer:heart:

Reminds me of one of the comics with Discord. Too bad he didn't elaborate on it all as much as you did in this story. Good read.
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I can tell you thought about the subjects of harmony, chaos, good and evil for some time before you wrote this. It doesn't surprise me that this story has no downvotes.
It's faved. Oh, and have a watch from me.

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Thank you very much!

Good thoughts. I'VE actually used the "Imperfect Perfection" thing before to describe Discord and great thing pertaining to him.
Also, if you want chaotic good find Genie nerdbastards.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/07/genie2.jpg
If you want chaotic neutral call for Discord.
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And if you want chaotic evil, summon Bill Ciphervignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/powerlisting/images/1/1a/Weirdmageddon_Gravity_Falls_Bill_Cipher.jpg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/400?cb=20151125084558

A wonderful sequel, very well done. You brought up numerous very good points, and make beautifully written arguments and catagorisations. Very well done. :)

The relationship between Twilight and Discord has a lot of potential. Seeing these‘teachable moments’ has been fun. Thank you for sharing your story with us!

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