What is this strange, terrifying, creature that haunts Luna's bedchamber ?
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Isn't that image from "Flapjack"?
Oh, and good story.
THE MARVELOUS MISADVENTURES OF FLAPJACK OH MY GOODNESS INSTA-THUMBED oh yeah, cool story too.
655966>>655949 Yes, and thank you
Oh,it'ssocleverthemouseisreallyavillainwhatatwistHAHAHAHAHAH NO.
I'm sorry but--- no wait, I'm not.
It's just so damn UNORIGINAL.
656015 Well, thank you for reading it anyways
I knew that mouse was from The Marvelous Misadventures of Flapjack! We all get cookies!
I chuckled. Classic!
656043 But I don't has enuf cookies for all
Why can't I help but think that the mouse going by the code name "Home Base" happens to be a certain genius, the one who has to share a cage with the one who's insane...
...I'm talking Pinkie and the Brain here, by the by.
The thought of Luna, Princess of the night, being terrified of a mouse amuses me.
And not to worry. The mice won't succeed, as they have failed to realize that Dogs, Cats, Tortises, Alligators, Rabbits, and Owls have already succeeded in taking over the Pony race.
656069 FUUUUUUU-
Shall we get an imaginary cookie instead?
I remember that rat from The Marvelous Misadventures of Flapjack. The moment I saw him I thought "Equestria's going to be infected by the plague, right?"
It's a shame that this creature didn't... COME TO PONYVILLE.
656330 are you telling me to write a sequel
? (I won't but if you want, go ahead 
)
656193 That is true
656109 That could work
656405 Well, I was making a reference to Friendly Uncle's Aliens/MLP crossover fic, "The Creature that Came to Ponyville", but sure, why not?
WHAT ARE WE GOING TO DO TODAY BRAIN?!
The same thing we do every day, Pinky, try to take over Equestria!
656449 Sounds great, I'll check that out
And oh mother of all facehoofs for not understanding your reference
656476
They're Pinky, they're Pinky and the Brain-Brain-Brain-Brain-BRAIN!
... ... ...
That ending was funny. Luna was wrong about disease but it was an evil mouse! LOL
656015
Well, it was either the mouse actually be evil or not. Either way, it has been done. But that doesn't make this story any less amusing.
Pinky and the Brain Brain Brain Brain Brain
Narf.
nice twist ending.
Luna tucking the mouse in with a napkin was adorable.
I reviewed this story tonight you can find it here