I'm glad to see you took my advice, Avian, and Magi flow so much better. A good scene, and I enjoyed Rarity, and it's interesting to see her portrayed as more of an advocate of women pleasuring each other, and not men.
671333 Your feedback has probably been the most helpful. I appreciate it very much ^.^ Though on the other side of the story, Lily's getting more and more in the mood for something rough. Keep your eyes peeled for Applejack's story by Saturday.
679563 I'm already about halfway through chapter 3. Give or take. It's actually writing itself fairly easily. Already over half the length of the other two, it may end up being the longest yet. I'm determined to get it finished by tomorrow, but I may very well finish it by tonight.
Rarity is my favorite. I really enjoyed writing this one.
656002 ANTHRO ponies or flurries dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_rainbowderp_flip.png
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Humanized? Pegasus = Avians, Unicorns = mage/magi
Rarity, sweetheart, you know how to please. =3
So much win. Applejack next pl0x.
I'm glad to see you took my advice, Avian, and Magi flow so much better. A good scene, and I enjoyed Rarity, and it's interesting to see her portrayed as more of an advocate of women pleasuring each other, and not men.
Write on you crazy person you.
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Your feedback has probably been the most helpful. I appreciate it very much ^.^ Though on the other side of the story, Lily's getting more and more in the mood for something rough. Keep your eyes peeled for Applejack's story by Saturday.
TAP ALL THE ASSES!! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
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Thanks ^^
If you ever need someone to pre-read or something, i'm plenty available. Or if you'd just rather i offer advice post chapter.
Oh, and as for Applejack? Yee-haw pardner!
SSSOOOOO CLOPYYYYY
A mustache to you, my good sir:
i just finished reading this...... for the second time
glad to see an author taking some advice from the comments, the spacing was much better, easier to read and therefore easier to enjoy!
keep on writing!!
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Thank you very much ^.^ Applejack's chapter will be released by Saturday evening. Keep an eye peeled
When do you think you will have the next chapter ready, not to rush you or anything but this is simply one of the best stories I've ever read.
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I'm already about halfway through chapter 3. Give or take. It's actually writing itself fairly easily. Already over half the length of the other two, it may end up being the longest yet. I'm determined to get it finished by tomorrow, but I may very well finish it by tonight.