I do this just for fun -- but sometimes I take myself a little too seriously. I know life's too short, but -- you know...
Spin-off of "Twilight for a Day."
Michael Walker chooses to return to Equestria despite an ominous warning from Princess Celestia. In his quest for fun, he learns some very valuable lessons about himself and what it means to be a pony. He will also have to deal with a mischievous Princess who will ultimately decide his fate.
In the process of editing, rewriting, and embellishing the story to improve its quality.
I apologize for publishing it too quickly.
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That like bar is interesting.
The negative response this story is getting boggles my mind.
Okay here's the thing I think people have issue with. You make no indication that Michel and his wife are having issues outside of the whole Twilight thing.
THen the fact you have Celestia apprently angry at Michel but doesn't do anything. THen have the whole discord kidnappe thing but Michel plays no part of it this time and Celestia never calls on him and then AFTER that everything is hunky dory with Discord after he just kiddnapped the mane 6. Not mention the who;e multiverse thing.
Frankly it be better to scrap what's here and start over.
my idea is that like in your main series Celestia brings him back to rescue Twilight, but during the battle Discord does something to Michel preventing him from ever returning home. And now Equestira has to deal with two Twilight's.
That's my idea on how to salvage this honestly good concept that's just right now poorly executed.
you really lost me here. Having him in a Twilight clone body was the best thing going for this.
6414045 Discord's still out there and can do some interesting things...
6415815 Frankly this needs a rewrite. the concept is great. but there's a lot issues. I mention most earlier.
I really don't think it's all that bad. It's not great, but it's not terrible, either.
It's a lie!
Yeah, this chapter was crap.
What a bitch hopefully the kids get sent to Equestria cause I'd hate to see how they'd turn out with this version of Brenda for a mother
6598303 Brenda's children are full grown adults as of this story -- the youngest is 20 years old -- it's the grand-kids who might suffer a little --- but with this much money, they'll be fine.
BRENDA...YOU BITCH !!!!!!!
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And you canceled this one too? How many stories of yours that I’m tracking have been canceled I wonder?